ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 12 Points (Bulgaria)

Actions End Undone - Poem by ONElia AVElar

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Words leave paper
actions end undone
like raw crabs
leaving my plate one by one
in a fish restaurant
I watch them smiling
vegetating happily
cause I am...
a sated vegetarian...


Comments about Actions End Undone by ONElia AVElar

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (1/3/2013 2:50:00 PM)

    Not such happy crabs if they landed on my plate!
    Love your work x (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (7/2/2010 5:02:00 AM)

    The metaphors work so well in this poem dear One, I'm liking it. As always your poems have great power via their brevity. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/27/2010 6:21:00 AM)

    I bet those crabs are smiling (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 27, 2010


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