ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,820 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Aawara Badal (The Vagabond Cloud) - Poem by ramesh rai

Aasman saaf nazar aa raha hai
chand badal k tukre umar-ghumar rahe hain
unhe talaash hai us prishthbhumi ki
jo sadiyon se banjar pare hain

Sky is clear
few fragment of clouds are hovering, in search of land
which is barren for century

Comments about Aawara Badal (The Vagabond Cloud) by ramesh rai

  • Rookie - 21 Points Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (9/8/2013 1:26:00 PM)

    Good. You have a talent for such short pieces. Keep writing till you become a Real Master! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/4/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Fantastic...beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (7/3/2013 4:24:00 PM)

    Monsoon ushers in here.Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (6/30/2013 6:50:00 PM)

    Such is the Divine kindness seeking for the deserving,
    so nice in both the languages! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,093 Points Wahab Abdul (6/30/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    its a nice poem... i love it to read.... i also have written some Hindi poems....cheers (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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