A Wounded Piano Poem by ahmed khaled

A Wounded Piano



it may be right,
to bleed
it may be great,
praiseworthy,
it may be commencement,
endlessness,
it may be to stay,
go,
it may be that,
this,
it may be yes,
no,
it may be 'bleed'
bleed......
just bleed......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 16 October 2011

'Bleed / Just bleed.' Beautiful conclusion. I love this one, so lovely.

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Unwritten Soul 16 October 2011

Bleeding from wounded piano, play a song of hurtful melodies...but it often pull feelings of listeners to feel sympathy..As you know the most intimate song comes from this instrument...if it bleed and bruised, it will sing heartfelt song...so let piano get healed to sing heart-ful song with it's charm...the only way to stop it bleed :) _Unwritten Soul

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2011

'it may be great, praiseworthy' RAB

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Fragments Of Light And Love 22 October 2011

wow true from the heart...indeed bleeding washes the pains too....

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Hosny Soliman 18 October 2011

Bleed all my spoiled blood Bleed all my sadness tears Refine all my thoughts from all bad dreams Please bleed or just bleed Thanks again and and again.

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Vipins Puthooran 17 October 2011

Bleed or just bleed, , there comes a melodious song.. Nice poem

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Crimson Love 16 October 2011

truly a magnificent poem! actually my favorite of yours! :) Incredible this poem is! :)

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