/ Lost In Words / Poem by ahmed khaled

/ Lost In Words /

Rating: 4.3


the sea was dust,
the dust was sea,
and both were sky
no one there
no one here
no one around
only the pens,
and this poet
lost in words

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 30 December 2011

All alone with your pen and the magic of sea, dust and sky. Many times words fall short to describe such magical moments of amazing beauty. Wonderful observaion, masterfully penned.

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Unwritten Soul 31 December 2011

For poet, everything just inside the pen..you can create illusion in mind just by word..your pen is a wand if you are wizard hahahaha....but also your pen is like crown for a King... You never lost in word, if you as a poet sew the nice words for heart to wear..Love in poetry is exist as poet use pen to write...Hmm maybe use computer in today's life hahaha Joking_Unwritten Soul

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Bella Stylos 02 January 2012

I like this poem! its makes me go over my life as a poet!

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Sd Tiwari 02 January 2012

Beautiful Khaled! If lost in words, then poems come out.

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Champs Ulysses Cabinatan 03 January 2012

I love this poem. powerful.

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Crisa Earley 02 February 2012

I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good!

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Deep Mukherjee 01 February 2012

yes; this is poetry and i am inspired; someday when i will be able enough; i will follow your footsteps! ! !

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Auro Bhattacharya 30 January 2012

Yes this one is one of the best works of you dear. Very imagery and deep meaning. Fantastic and you deserve the best appreciation.

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Fiona Eris Strand 27 January 2012

Thank you for inviting me to read this. I very much enjoy short and concise abstractions of this kind.

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Alicia Meyers 27 January 2012

I like it. :) Very good.

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