Unwritten Soul

A Story of The Rising Butterfly / Underneath My Chrysalis

Laying on the green leaf, left and abandoned
Be a caterpillar, never easy as u thought
Hated, oppressed are common, love is rarely brought
With friends, everywhere is like home, strong without bone
Chase away negative shadow out of sacred zone

Up to the sky, wind share stories beyond the garden
You hope to fly, discover new world heaven
Hopes given by grasshopper always make you strong
Dragonfly said, dream high, it is nothing wrong

'What joking and tricks you try to do?
Don't u realize me, a worm look like you?
Stop dreaming, we useless, nothing we can do'
But for caterpillar, everything possible to do
Worm said i can't wait to laugh at you
Smiled, caterpillar replied 'I'll prove to u'

Revolution mind trigger real evolution
Wrapped in chrysalis, carrying seed of ambition
Confidence is a key, frustration is motivation
Follow intuition, hunt for pride redemption
Just leave out your depression...

Dawn disappeared, morning taking over
It is time to hunt dreams,
Fight obstacles across the stream
Step down, you walk toward light beam
Everybody surprised almost to scream

Worm can't stop glaring and wondering
Friends sharing bliss and cheering
Wow..Wow wow beautiful, but who are you...
Caterpillar is that really you...?

Amazingly, now how beautiful you have being
Worm seems like don't believe what it just seeing
Flawless scene, rainbow lines you create wings
Caterpillar confides, this thing has a meaning
Essential thing, find yourself, not just dreaming

Thousand miles traveled, your wound now healed
Thousands flowers to meet, million pollens to breed
No more taste bitter leaves, now got free honey as a gift
Life destiny can be changed to what u wants it to be,
But you have to believe what you can be and what you want to be

Appreciate friends for support and love
Thanks to hater for hate instead of love
Because hate is hidden behind the love
In life composed of varies friends or foe
Respect them for perfectly play their roles

'...last whisper, before butterfly leaves the eggs
now u will know why butterfly(adult) leave u alone....- said wind'

: : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Courage by friend and haters: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Friend or foe? who lift u up? the the main role is U
Thanks for each of them for their crucial roles
different...revenge is not in list....just prove who r U!
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Submitted: Monday, August 16, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, October 02, 2012

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  • Frank James Davis (4/7/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    Your poetry has dimension because you examine a subject from many angles.
    Like most of your work, Soul, this is a superior offering. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 931 Points Kanav Justa (12/29/2012 8:45:00 AM)

    Your emotions too flow like a butterfly.... so much time in this poem i was filled with lots of positive energy.... story of a cattrplr to buttrfly... very encouraging (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 570 Points Tony Karas (12/12/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    Totally beautiful with so many hinted at lessons. Just leave out your depression..... if only it were that simple. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 570 Points Ruby Honeytip (11/21/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    Just mesmerising, fantastic, multi-layered work.....Wow! !
    This makes me wonder what your process is.
    Midnights Voice's poetry flows freely, and quickly I am told, from his spirit to his pen.
    Is it the same for you I wonder? (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,587 Points Valsa George (11/4/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful message! With positive thoughts, we can scale great heights and love is the antidote to all maladies of the world! This poem will certainly remain as a source of inspiration to many! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,443 Points * Sunprincess * (10/2/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    Oh Unwritten Soul this is the best poem and message
    I have read in a very long time..brilliant..thank you..
    for sharing.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (5/4/2012 7:55:00 AM)

    Here in this poem the central metaphor is the rising butterfly.Great thought and nice representation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Willie Walker (2/20/2012 11:10:00 AM)

    Each soul is a chrysalis, waiting for a kind word or deed to start the process of making the world a more beautiful place. You seem to be one of the folk who like to start the process. Thanks fo the wonderful read. willie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Vipins Puthooran (2/9/2012 1:19:00 PM)

    [metamorphosis of mind]
    Excellent metaphors and imageries!
    Elegant writing
    Amazin poem! ! ! really deserves 100/100 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Harindhar Reddy (11/10/2011 12:00:00 PM)

    Awe-inspiring poem with name of butterfly you flew to whole universe I mean human universe. You sprinkled message everywhere. Lot ideas are generated are you a diamond mine in South Africa.
    'Thousand miles traveled, your wound now healed
    Thousands flowers to meet, million pollens to breed'

    Your mind dug in deep and explored every leave. Great keep it up. Good show with some glow like glow worm. Take this sent by garland to adorn you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 555 Points Bernard Snyder (10/10/2011 2:08:00 PM)

    Articulately written 'piece' here as well. It is truly amazing how we can take the negative people around us and write something so positive! Awesome, and thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/17/2011 11:20:00 AM)

    The best imageries are written here from unwritten soul.They play in the portrait elucidated here.A great art and articulation here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Terence George Craddock (9/19/2010 6:29:00 AM)

    'Revolution mind trigger real evolution
    Wrapped in chrysalis, carrying seed of ambition
    Confidence is a key, frustration is motivation
    Follow intuition, hunt for pride redemption
    Just leave out your depression...'

    Deliverance Through Life Choices

    all clay is supposed
    to transcend life plane prison
    all bodies are supposed
    to chrysalis seek vision
    all souls are potential butterfly
    in quest transition
    all hearts sincere evolve in purity
    light to home heaven

    all flesh must conflict mortality
    fail experience leaven
    all fermentation flesh to brain
    enlivens spirit revelation
    all divine will is truth hidden
    secret purpose is salvation

    Inspired by the poem ‘Underneath My Chrysalis’ by Unwritten Soul.
    Copyright © Terence George Craddock (Report) Reply

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