Unwritten Soul


A Few Words - Poem by Unwritten Soul

A few words
Could bring more than a sound
Touch the ears turn wry to golden smile
or sharper than a glass to cut into pieces

Misunderstanding,
Winding up a road between us
Separating emotions out of mind from the case
Would be wrong to let ego reign the grace
How ignorant sometimes heart could be?
Deaf two ears, and blinding opened eyes
Pretend the silence is your voice
Avoiding you is not a choice

Misunderstanding
A curse of few words
Lead a way to stray from the truth
A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
You............Silence
Standing still but beautifully broken
I looked into your eyes and surprised
In a mirror of a story without lies
Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
No, your lips tightly sealed
It is your voice within sent to me

A few words
I used as the sharp glass tease
Cut you deeply, and you bleed
Saw it all behind the naked eyes
But you still standing to hold me
Never mind how wrong i can be
How i can find a magic in a few words
To heal your pain stained and clot
Regretting how wrong i did to you
To believe unreal and count your tears
I never thought so hurtful this way
When i thinking of myself it linking to you
I hurting myself whenever i hurt you

A few words
I tried to search for proper sorry
Would you blind your eyes, deaf two ears?
Words crime sound nothing but now i fear?
It fears me as i don't to lose you
...Forget the past and start a new
we never meant to be hurt...
You replied with A few words
In form of softness creating golden smile
Your sweet words neutralize the voice of bile
I learned how to speak when i was a child
But just understanding 'A few words' now

Misunderstanding
Lesson of learning to understand
If i can turn back each time i hurt you
Will avoid this bruises stamp on you
Now, between this winding road
As i standing at the aisle of choices
Picking either Emotions or Mind
Decided to fuse, balance these two
A relevant choice for not to hurt you
Sanity tell all to me,
We meet not to wait this end
We born to be happy till the end of time

A few words
Powerful or hurtful
Time to choose...

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The twisted story just for a write to point what
words can do..for me it's better silent than let
people hurt by our words, unless we make say it better
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Comments about A Few Words by Unwritten Soul

  • Silver Star - 4,296 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/20/2015 11:53:00 AM)

    A powerful, poem that is both creative and compelling! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 703 Points Crystal Pierce (3/30/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    Amazing poem! I really liked the ending Soul. Nicely put thanks for the inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 703 Points Crystal Pierce (3/30/2015 8:35:00 PM)

    Amazing poem! If you don't mind could you look at my poems, and then possibly either comment on them or inbox me on here. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Bharati Nayak (3/18/2015 10:11:00 AM)

    Words can make or break relations.Words are very powerful.All literature is based on words.We should always be careful in our choice of words.This is a very well crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,306 Points Bernard Snyder (3/9/2015 4:25:00 PM)

    Nice work 'US. I finally able to catch up to this masterpiece'. Sorry it took so long but Im glad I had the opportunity have read such a 'piece! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,939 Points Amitava Sur (11/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    An excellent penning about how powerfull are some words in our life or in our thoughts. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,325 Points Lyn Paul (11/16/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    Soul you are such a gentle Soul yet so strong to be able to hold your emotions to prevent hurting others. You are a great role model. Thank you Soul for your wonderful words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,664 Points Ramesh Rai (10/27/2014 9:57:00 AM)

    Misunderstanding
    A curse of few words
    Lead a way to stray from the truth
    A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
    A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
    You............Silence
    Standing still but beautifully broken
    I looked into your eyes and surprised
    In a mirror of a story without lies
    Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
    Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
    No, your lips tightly sealed
    It is your voice within sent to me
    Each word speaks good word (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    These are words which give a wound deeper than a sword, again these are words which heal up the deepest wounds. Words when beautifully used create a poem like this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    ....your words are really articulate and powerful, the beautiful words have a soothing effect..and poem conveys a beautiful message....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 329 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 4:08:00 AM)

    Excellent...very enlightening sentiments! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (10/1/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    I don't think I am eligible enough to comment on such a poem...salute to you from the core of my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (9/30/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    Soul, I love the meaning you are conveying in this emotional poem, and I also wrote a similar poem, 'Words'
    if you ever get a chance to read it, you will see we feel very similar in what words mean. excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (9/9/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    Love this! ! ! !
    Decided to fuse, balance these two
    A relevant choice for not to hurt you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    excellent poem Soul words are power tools good and bad they can hurt and also heal (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 8:24:00 AM)

    Words are so powerful..it can cut as sharp as knife and sweet words can do wonders...Beautiful write.Loved reading it. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (7/17/2013 8:56:00 PM)

    Words can either build up or tear down, wound or heal. When we use it
    we must do so ever so carefully. You covered this subject very well.
    I invite you to read my poem The Fiery Tongue. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 799 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/2/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    Words have great power. All human knowledge, emotions and philosophy is communicated trough words. You learned how to use words in childhood, good. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shiny Princess (6/1/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    I don't see rhythms at all (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anoop Nair (4/7/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    This is by far one of the best(I am no big poet or something to comment but still) .Looks like you put your heart and soul into it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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