Unwritten Soul


A Few Words - Poem by Unwritten Soul

A few words
Could bring more than a sound
Touch the ears turn wry to golden smile
or sharper than a glass to cut into pieces

Misunderstanding,
Winding up a road between us
Separating emotions out of mind from the case
Would be wrong to let ego reign the grace
How ignorant sometimes heart could be?
Deaf two ears, and blinding opened eyes
Pretend the silence is your voice
Avoiding you is not a choice

Misunderstanding
A curse of few words
Lead a way to stray from the truth
A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
You............Silence
Standing still but beautifully broken
I looked into your eyes and surprised
In a mirror of a story without lies
Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
No, your lips tightly sealed
It is your voice within sent to me

A few words
I used as the sharp glass tease
Cut you deeply, and you bleed
Saw it all behind the naked eyes
But you still standing to hold me
Never mind how wrong i can be
How i can find a magic in a few words
To heal your pain stained and clot
Regretting how wrong i did to you
To believe unreal and count your tears
I never thought so hurtful this way
When i thinking of myself it linking to you
I hurting myself whenever i hurt you

A few words
I tried to search for proper sorry
Would you blind your eyes, deaf two ears?
Words crime sound nothing but now i fear?
It fears me as i don't to lose you
...Forget the past and start a new
we never meant to be hurt...
You replied with A few words
In form of softness creating golden smile
Your sweet words neutralize the voice of bile
I learned how to speak when i was a child
But just understanding 'A few words' now

Misunderstanding
Lesson of learning to understand
If i can turn back each time i hurt you
Will avoid this bruises stamp on you
Now, between this winding road
As i standing at the aisle of choices
Picking either Emotions or Mind
Decided to fuse, balance these two
A relevant choice for not to hurt you
Sanity tell all to me,
We meet not to wait this end
We born to be happy till the end of time

A few words
Powerful or hurtful
Time to choose...

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The twisted story just for a write to point what
words can do..for me it's better silent than let
people hurt by our words, unless we make say it better
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Topic(s) of this poem: choice, friendship, hurt, love, words


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thank you Remi Anderson for lending your voice here. You are welcomed to do the same for my poems if you want to..

Comments about A Few Words by Unwritten Soul

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/5/2016 9:26:00 AM)

    indeed words can hurt or heal. Such a creative composition my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Anne Yun Anne Yun (6/5/2016 4:45:00 AM)

    Words matter too much, a few words can tear a person apart, a few words can turn a life to art.
    'One word then, one smile, is enough'- Pablo Neruda
    Really enjoyed really your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Luo Zhihai Luo Zhihai (6/1/2016 9:13:00 AM)

    A few words, no more! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (5/14/2016 10:43:00 PM)

    .....so true, and so much wisdom in this write...
    and actually I feel I needed to read this
    thank you soul for this beautiful message ★ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/15/2016 2:34:00 AM)

    You will be fine sunprincess, clouds will take all your tears...and tears will rain and green the land. Hope you are fine and better now_Soul

  • Chan Mongol Chan Mongol (5/13/2016 12:11:00 PM)

    Few words are good enough for any best or worst thing. Words meant for lives. The poet wrote,

    A few words
    Powerful or hurtful
    Time to choose
    ______That says it all. Thank you poet for such a beautiful poem. You sure cleared up your ideas. The poem is very special for me. Number 10 is for such a brilliant work. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Billsborough (5/9/2016 9:08:00 AM)

    wow! I wasn't expecting this. It has great depth and the feelings and thoughts are so well sustained right through a longer poem. There are some very beautiful lines... As I standing at the aisle of choices is my favourite but it's a close run thing with many others. An easy ten for my Unwritten Soul
    Tom Billsborough (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/10/2016 12:18:00 AM)

    Oh thank you Tom for your very moving words...you delighted my day :)

  • Untamed Heart Untamed Heart (5/5/2016 9:17:00 PM)

    A few words
    Powerful or hurtful
    Time to choose...

    but sadly others chose to use hurtful words without thinking how it would affect others feelings. (Report) Reply

  • Gholamreza Zarban Gholamreza Zarban (3/25/2016 4:42:00 PM)

    This is the second time I write this comment. The first time, it seems it wasn't submitted. By the way, yes. Just a few words can do a lot... (Report) Reply

  • Gholamreza Zarban Gholamreza Zarban (3/25/2016 4:39:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading your poem. A few words. Yes. Just a few words can do quite a lot... (Report) Reply

  • Remi Andersen (3/9/2016 10:40:00 AM)

    I have made a vid (sent it) with better sound quality (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:22:00 PM)

    Thank you again Remi, i appreciate it a lot :) You too keep on writing new poems :)

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (3/5/2016 10:49:00 PM)

    The power of word is sharper than any weapon. It can both hurt or heal.
    A powerful poem! Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:24:00 PM)

    Thank you Geeta, thank you for the shared thoughts too :)

  • Kewayne Wadley Kewayne Wadley (2/16/2016 12:19:00 PM)

    This is utterly amazing. I love what you've done here.
    The images, the colors you used to paint your canvas.
    Very powerful as indeed we should watch our words as well
    Thanks for sharing. This piece is brimming with creativity
    KW (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:23:00 PM)

    Thank you Kewayne, thanks for your kind words, time and spent moment for this poem...i am happy that you feel it

  • Remi Andersen (1/12/2016 4:39:00 AM)

    i would love to send u the others when i am done. and my friend. if i can call you that call me Twisted (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (1/19/2016 6:25:00 AM)

    Hahahaha thank you :) ..Twisted is your new name is it? Keep writing new poems too Remi...dont waste what you you have in mind, let if flow too and give it chance to live at least on a paper :)

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (1/9/2016 6:28:00 AM)

    Thanks Remi Anderson for your recitation, i really honored by your kindness, i enjoyed listening your soul-translation in your recitation of this poem. It is nice and beautiful and again Thank you dear Remi :) (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/26/2015 12:50:00 AM)

    Sometimes words are not enough to overcome emotion
    Sometimes ego coloring interpretation of the one who should hear the truth
    And all got too complicated to be unbind
    Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Remi Andersen (12/8/2015 2:48:00 AM)

    I read poems to youtube and just wanted to ask if i could read your poems. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (12/8/2015 10:43:00 PM)

    Instead of saying I allowed, i said Thank you...Thanks Remi for giving my poems a chance to be heard..by your voice :) . Thanks also for looking my poems though they are not the best ones in this poem site

  • Ashek Sarker Ashek Sarker (12/6/2015 7:37:00 AM)

    an epic on human relationship that got shattered by the vain ego..this is how i would like to assess this beautiful poem.ego is the main barrier on our way of establishing a successful communication.the sad thing is we all are victims of this vicious ego (Report) Reply

  • Aranthabailu Ummar Aranthabailu Ummar (8/8/2015 4:08:00 AM)

    Yeah something you decided.
    It may reflects to my words too. Because I myself far away from politeness.
    It is subject to thing about hurting myself & hurting others
    To make deep about it I have to go more deep about this poem
    I wants to read all of your work & note my will on it
    But I am too small to come up to you (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/20/2015 11:53:00 AM)

    A powerful, poem that is both creative and compelling! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Crystal Pierce Crystal Pierce (3/30/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    Amazing poem! I really liked the ending Soul. Nicely put thanks for the inspiration. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 15, 2016


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