Unwritten Soul


A Few Words - Poem by Unwritten Soul

A few words
Could bring more than a sound
Touch the ears turn wry to golden smile
or sharper than a glass to cut into pieces

Misunderstanding,
Winding up a road between us
Separating emotions out of mind from the case
Would be wrong to let ego reign the grace
How ignorant sometimes heart could be?
Deaf two ears, and blinding opened eyes
Pretend the silence is your voice
Avoiding you is not a choice

Misunderstanding
A curse of few words
Lead a way to stray from the truth
A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
You............Silence
Standing still but beautifully broken
I looked into your eyes and surprised
In a mirror of a story without lies
Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
No, your lips tightly sealed
It is your voice within sent to me

A few words
I used as the sharp glass tease
Cut you deeply, and you bleed
Saw it all behind the naked eyes
But you still standing to hold me
Never mind how wrong i can be
How i can find a magic in a few words
To heal your pain stained and clot
Regretting how wrong i did to you
To believe unreal and count your tears
I never thought so hurtful this way
When i thinking of myself it linking to you
I hurting myself whenever i hurt you

A few words
I tried to search for proper sorry
Would you blind your eyes, deaf two ears?
Words crime sound nothing but now i fear?
It fears me as i don't to lose you
...Forget the past and start a new
we never meant to be hurt...
You replied with A few words
In form of softness creating golden smile
Your sweet words neutralize the voice of bile
I learned how to speak when i was a child
But just understanding 'A few words' now

Misunderstanding
Lesson of learning to understand
If i can turn back each time i hurt you
Will avoid this bruises stamp on you
Now, between this winding road
As i standing at the aisle of choices
Picking either Emotions or Mind
Decided to fuse, balance these two
A relevant choice for not to hurt you
Sanity tell all to me,
We meet not to wait this end
We born to be happy till the end of time

A few words
Powerful or hurtful
Time to choose...

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The twisted story just for a write to point what
words can do..for me it's better silent than let
people hurt by our words, unless we make say it better
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Comments about A Few Words by Unwritten Soul

  • Gholamreza Zarban Gholamreza Zarban (3/25/2016 4:42:00 PM)

    This is the second time I write this comment. The first time, it seems it wasn't submitted. By the way, yes. Just a few words can do a lot... (Report) Reply

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  • Gholamreza Zarban Gholamreza Zarban (3/25/2016 4:39:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading your poem. A few words. Yes. Just a few words can do quite a lot... (Report) Reply

  • Remi Andersen (3/9/2016 10:40:00 AM)

    I have made a vid (sent it) with better sound quality (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:22:00 PM)

    Thank you again Remi, i appreciate it a lot :) You too keep on writing new poems :)

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (3/5/2016 10:49:00 PM)

    The power of word is sharper than any weapon. It can both hurt or heal.
    A powerful poem! Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:24:00 PM)

    Thank you Geeta, thank you for the shared thoughts too :)

  • Kewayne Wadley Kewayne Wadley (2/16/2016 12:19:00 PM)

    This is utterly amazing. I love what you've done here.
    The images, the colors you used to paint your canvas.
    Very powerful as indeed we should watch our words as well
    Thanks for sharing. This piece is brimming with creativity
    KW (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (3/9/2016 11:23:00 PM)

    Thank you Kewayne, thanks for your kind words, time and spent moment for this poem...i am happy that you feel it

  • Remi Andersen (1/12/2016 4:39:00 AM)

    i would love to send u the others when i am done. and my friend. if i can call you that call me Twisted (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (1/19/2016 6:25:00 AM)

    Hahahaha thank you :) ..Twisted is your new name is it? Keep writing new poems too Remi...dont waste what you you have in mind, let if flow too and give it chance to live at least on a paper :)

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (1/9/2016 6:28:00 AM)

    Thanks Remi Anderson for your recitation, i really honored by your kindness, i enjoyed listening your soul-translation in your recitation of this poem. It is nice and beautiful and again Thank you dear Remi :) (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/26/2015 12:50:00 AM)

    Sometimes words are not enough to overcome emotion
    Sometimes ego coloring interpretation of the one who should hear the truth
    And all got too complicated to be unbind
    Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Remi Andersen (12/8/2015 2:48:00 AM)

    I read poems to youtube and just wanted to ask if i could read your poems. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (12/8/2015 10:43:00 PM)

    Instead of saying I allowed, i said Thank you...Thanks Remi for giving my poems a chance to be heard..by your voice :) . Thanks also for looking my poems though they are not the best ones in this poem site

  • Ashek Sarker Ashek Sarker (12/6/2015 7:37:00 AM)

    an epic on human relationship that got shattered by the vain ego..this is how i would like to assess this beautiful poem.ego is the main barrier on our way of establishing a successful communication.the sad thing is we all are victims of this vicious ego (Report) Reply

  • Aranthabailu Ummar Aranthabailu Ummar (8/8/2015 4:08:00 AM)

    Yeah something you decided.
    It may reflects to my words too. Because I myself far away from politeness.
    It is subject to thing about hurting myself & hurting others
    To make deep about it I have to go more deep about this poem
    I wants to read all of your work & note my will on it
    But I am too small to come up to you (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/20/2015 11:53:00 AM)

    A powerful, poem that is both creative and compelling! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Crystal Pierce Crystal Pierce (3/30/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    Amazing poem! I really liked the ending Soul. Nicely put thanks for the inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Crystal Pierce Crystal Pierce (3/30/2015 8:35:00 PM)

    Amazing poem! If you don't mind could you look at my poems, and then possibly either comment on them or inbox me on here. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (3/18/2015 10:11:00 AM)

    Words can make or break relations.Words are very powerful.All literature is based on words.We should always be careful in our choice of words.This is a very well crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (3/9/2015 4:25:00 PM)

    Nice work 'US. I finally able to catch up to this masterpiece'. Sorry it took so long but Im glad I had the opportunity have read such a 'piece! (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    An excellent penning about how powerfull are some words in our life or in our thoughts. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (11/16/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    Soul you are such a gentle Soul yet so strong to be able to hold your emotions to prevent hurting others. You are a great role model. Thank you Soul for your wonderful words (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (10/27/2014 9:57:00 AM)

    Misunderstanding
    A curse of few words
    Lead a way to stray from the truth
    A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
    A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
    You............Silence
    Standing still but beautifully broken
    I looked into your eyes and surprised
    In a mirror of a story without lies
    Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
    Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
    No, your lips tightly sealed
    It is your voice within sent to me
    Each word speaks good word (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (6/19/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    These are words which give a wound deeper than a sword, again these are words which heal up the deepest wounds. Words when beautifully used create a poem like this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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