A Reflection Through My Eyes (I See) Poem by Unwritten Soul

A Reflection Through My Eyes (I See)

Rating: 4.3


I look at the sky
Wonder how tall it could be
I put my hands on my heart
Wonder how many beats left to live
Day passed to night
But eyes tired to see and sleep

If i could be the air people use to breathe
From them, I want to know what secrets lies beneath
From them, I want to learn how i can cope to live
But all are for them not me
So i cant find what i want to be

Then I look myself on water reflection
Sober to know the real one is me
No matter who i used to be
I do own true me
Our life is living beyond infinity
Because value of self entity is eternity

I look at the sky
Now i see chances are through bravery
As long this heart beats still
I own me to be me

A Reflection Through My Eyes (I See)
Sunday, April 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We dont have to see others perception to live well,
we do have our own preferences, and our needs
Of course we have done some mistakes but we learning is a must
Coz Mistakes are meant to be for life lesson
Wrong to try to be perfect coz there is no solid definition for it
we will die to be perfect coz it indded equal to impossible
Just embrace who you are, imperfect you is perfect
Live your life simply with meaning
not desire of many
Eternity is when you put all thing rest but the the truth
Even death is there, the true still true

Poem, Painting by Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronnie Forest 26 April 2015

What a wonderful poem!

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Hans Vr 29 June 2015

Dear Soul, This is a piece full of wonderful wisdom, written in a supremely poetic way. Each verse speaks to the heart of the reader and touches our soul. There is indeed only one to live our life and that is to be fully our self while connecting to our Creator, that eternal ethereal flow of bliss and wisdom that great spirit, we can find everywhere anytime, if we jsut try hard enough to connect...

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Unwritten Soul 25 July 2015

Thank you Hans, there is always a need for mind to speak, and sometimes art is the language... Ive lost in misunderstanding about fixed life andhow i supposed to lived by world, but i know as long i dont do wrong, i can live they way i own :) Selamat Hari Raya

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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2017

Something (So) Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Sorry! ! ! ! ! About That Soul, It Missed Or I Missed That Word! ! ! ! ! Again Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 June 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! How Beautifully Deep! ! ! ! ! How Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! Something Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Awe inspiring Painting Too! ! ! ! ! ! Breathtaking! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Added To Favs

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Unwritten Soul 29 June 2017

Thank you Rebecca :) you always give sweet words here and there, thanks :) :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2017

Our life is living beyond infinity Because value of self entity is eternity.. i like these lines very much in this poem.. dear poetess. tony

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2016

Thank you dear Christ, your words always comfort me thanks a lot :) :)

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Christopher Tye 17 October 2016

Wonderful poem, so much beauty captured in your words. It's a really beautiful painting you've used for your illustration.

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Unwritten Soul 19 October 2016

Thanks Dear Christ, thank you for those beautiful words...it show how beautiful heart you have as it reflected from your kind words on my poem :) :) Merci, Danke

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