Kavya ...

A Special Relationship - Poem by Kavya ...

You are my creator
My mentor, my teacher,
You are the guiding force of my life
Who always help me in times of strife.

I know you are and will always be
by my side,
You are someone above God
And these words I shall always abide.

I saw the world with your eyes
With your help was able to differentiate the good and the bad;
Whenever I went wrong, you corrected me and yelled at me
The privilege which every mom has on her lad.

Yes friends, she is none other than my Mom
A wonderful creation of Almighty,
As God cannot be everywhere
She is the replacement of this holy deity.

Mom, you are the epitome of my existence
The reason for my subsistence,
Howsoever I describe you, I know my words will always fall short
As a mom-child relationship is of that special sort!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thank you Mom for everything. Love you lots.

Comments about A Special Relationship by Kavya ...

  • Rookie - 435 Points Rishi Thakkar (10/27/2015 7:17:00 AM)

    Beautifully framed with words (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 24,560 Points Liza Sud Russia (9/29/2015 2:12:00 AM)

    Lovely! indeed mother - is the closest image one may compare with God! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 46,898 Points Edward Kofi Louis (9/27/2015 9:44:00 AM)

    We should thank the CREATOR in life! Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,468 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/4/2015 9:54:00 AM)

    A great tribute in the poem to the revered mother and a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 477 Points Karunanidhy S (4/30/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    Nobody can do anything more than a mother, whoevr he or she be!
    A very heart-touching poem..Good! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,262 Points Soumita Sarkar (4/26/2015 10:20:00 AM)

    Lovely just lovely.........lines for one Mother.....Keep it up! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,214 Points Amitava Sur (3/20/2015 11:10:00 AM)

    A lovely penning where you kept the lovely mom above all. Very truly I also agree her to be above any God.

    She is the most nearest to me
    Who nurtured and fed me through that cord.
    She knotted me so endearingly with that umbilical cord ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,949 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/31/2015 8:35:00 AM)

    Yes, as you rightly say, mother is the God's representative on earth. A beautiful poem. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,667 Points Roseann Shawiak (12/15/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    How totally beautiful! This poem is a wonderful tribute to your Mom and mothers everywhere! Everything you have written can be said of everyone's mom, she is the one who will always share our hearts no matter what! I absolutely love this poem. My mom is gone, but you have described her as well. Thank you. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (6/1/2014 1:03:00 PM)

    though we can never reciprocate what moms do for us, can't think even, but the way you have covered all the aspects of her personality is so innocent and superbly rendered poetically...Kavya i love this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,022 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/18/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    A great poem for great love! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (9/16/2013 2:31:00 AM)

    Ah, it made me smile..such a beautiful heart! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (9/14/2013 5:08:00 PM)

    as long as your creator is your teacher and mentor everything will run smoothly. lovlely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 6:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Kavya...Especially mom..Yes, its such a beautiful relationship that a child always feel safe when near to mom...A sort of happiness....Loved it...

    If you like some funny poem please do read my Happy Learning Dear! , when you are free.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Ameya Deshpande (4/19/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    very true! a really nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (3/21/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    A mom-child relationship is the best- It is very special indeed! Hope you got your mom to read your mind through the well written poem.She must surely be mighty pleased.May God bless this special relationship! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Neethu Prasanna (3/16/2013 12:12:00 AM)

    Very nice indeed. That relationship is a treasure. Guard it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (3/14/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    so true and passonate to read....well done..u a real poetess..hats off (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Anoop Nair (3/14/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    Nice poem.I enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (3/13/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Indeed it is a special relationship which cannot be replaced with any other relationship! You are fortunate to enjoy her love now! We who have lost our mothers still live in the memory of that love! I am sure this dedication must have immensely pleased your mom! ! Enjoyed reading it Kavya! I invite you to read two of my poems on my mother- 'Drop of a Feather' and My Mother (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013

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