Gayle Sweeney

Rookie - 32 Points (1955 / USA)

A Shooting Star - Poem by Gayle Sweeney

Between the tall, darkened evergreen trees
Some twinkling stars shined
In the night brightly..
The black sky is a melody
Where a shooting star is
A trolley to our dreams.


Comments about A Shooting Star by Gayle Sweeney

  • Silver Star - 3,679 Points Valerie Dohren (12/22/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    Wonderful, very imaginative. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 364 Points Joseph Anderson (12/22/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    May your guiding star lead you through a happy and fulfilling new year. Please write some more (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,966 Points Smoky Hoss (12/22/2012 10:25:00 AM)

    Oh, I do like this one; has such an aura of mystic to it. Wonderful words Gayle. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (2/21/2011 9:20:00 PM)

    Short, but a beautiful poem. Great penmanship and thanks for allowing us to read this work of art. Just Great. Lynn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, February 3, 2012


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