Gayle Sweeney

Rookie - 26 Points (1955 / USA)

A Blue Jay - Poem by Gayle Sweeney

A blue jay's feathered back holds spots of white clouds
And soft, glistening blue.
Upon its wings is painted days of sapphires
And snowy flurries, too.
I peeked out beyond the open curtain
At the big, flowering rhododendron.
There a bright, silent blue jay landed suddenly.
Amoung our pink fairy blossoms it stopped by me,
Jewelled with patches of rich blue - perhaps a gift
From the azure sky.
We might even think some of pure heaven
Is in flight when blue jays fly.
This dappled blue jay then soon quietly moved from branch to branch
In the green blooming shrubbery outside my window.
By boughs of cool leaves like sheaths
All at once it paused for a moment
And surprisingly looked up at me from below.


Comments about A Blue Jay by Gayle Sweeney

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (6/26/2014 6:07:00 PM)

    What a lovely, happy, private moment poem. I liked the line: Upon its wings is painted days of sapphires. Read mine – Blue Bird –
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  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (4/28/2014 6:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful, vivid, varying imagery! Wonderfully done. The incredible sights and feelings that come with an innocent, enchanting blue jay. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,054 Points Michelle Claus (4/28/2014 10:54:00 AM)

    Pretty. In spirit, it reminds me of the purpose behind a Japanese haiku - to capture a moment in time and exalt it. You've done this with your lovely poem, and I'll be reminded of your poem next time I spy a blue jay. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 514 Points Stephen W (4/28/2014 9:08:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,768 Points Francis Lynch (4/28/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    The character needs to remove the window, or get outside, or have someone help her/him get outside. As beautiful as the bird is, it is separated from the viewer. Obviously the bird doesn't understand why, on such a lovely day, one would be inside. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (4/28/2013 5:40:00 PM)

    When I read this poem it was like a little girl that wasn't me was reading it to me :) it just feels so soft in depth and texture, and so deep in meaning. Great job :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (4/28/2013 2:53:00 AM)

    All the reviews are right. Fine job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Jayne Davies (4/28/2013 1:48:00 AM)

    Great poem! Well done x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (4/30/2012 11:08:00 PM)

    Very lovely and lively poem, and very nice writing technique. I enjoyed reading it while imagining the description of the poem, right before my eyes.
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Dawn Ferrett (4/30/2012 12:36:00 PM)

    Beautiful! You are truly gifted! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Judy Ponceby (4/29/2012 12:20:00 AM)

    Your visions of the Blue Jay are very colorful and vivid against the background of the rhododendron. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Manonton Dalan (4/28/2012 5:09:00 AM)

    love of nature is always with no matter where i go. very nice for you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Joseph Anderson (4/21/2012 2:46:00 PM)

    A delicately, sweet look at the beauties of our nature. So deserving of being poem of the day, or
    any day. Joe (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,522 Points Valerie Dohren (4/18/2012 1:41:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem - clearly you are a bird lover, as I am myself. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 405 Points Patti Masterman (2/1/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    I just adore Bluejays. Thank you for a wonderful tribute poem..I could just see the Jays intelligent eyes in your words..they are an amazing bird aren't they? (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,809 Points Smoky Hoss (12/24/2011 3:38:00 PM)

    This is beautiful. I love the picture you have presented to us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Matt Mooney (12/20/2010 2:37:00 PM)

    The Blue Jay flutters through the lines of your poem.You captured the moment beautifully, if not the bird.10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 10, 2012


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