A Passing Thought Poem by Mamta Agarwal

A Passing Thought

Rating: 4.4


The train
Moved,
And
In no time
We
Were out
In the countryside.

Pink clouds
Dotted the evening sky.
Far out,
Paddy fields.
Smoke
Billowing out
Of the chimneys.

Dim lights
In the cottages
Of sparsely populated
Villages.
Soon its
Twilight,
All is quiet.


Just a few miles
Away from the city,
Which comes to life
At night,
With
Nocturnal activities.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 30 June 2008

A nice thought though passing! Great write! Pl. go through my DELIGHT IS THE TRAIN TRAVEL in the PH.

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Ency Bearis 30 June 2008

a good thought...nicely written... Ency Bearis

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Janri Gogeshvili 01 July 2008

Pleasantly, to Read … original nostalgia about idylls …10

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

presentation brisk and stylish...words fall into an automatic rhythm...good poem...10

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 03 July 2008

Hello Mamta, a short brief thought but a nice long enjoyable glance and ride. Thanks, Loyd

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Colin Jeffery 03 October 2008

What a charming word picture. I loved it.

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Ric Bastasa 21 September 2008

i agree. it was a very nice train ride with me there too. very vivid and touched my heart.thank you doc.

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Marilyn Lott 09 September 2008

That was a wonderful train ride in the country. Thank you so much for taking me! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 July 2008

Madam, I liked the simple way you express even tough things. A true poem sathya narayana

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Chitra - 11 July 2008

a vividly expressed poem

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