Salt of tears on lips
Astringent on spirit,
Heart- bitter sweet…
It gives a nice taste of sweet and sour sauce which I love! -Raj
Mamta, these tastes overcome the monotony and add spice to life. I love all these tastes. CP
flavors of the various emotions well encapsulated in these lines
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Wow, what a lovely haiku. A beautiful expression. Salty lips.. Astringent on spirit. Thanks for the sharing.
Superb......................10 I liked it salt and tears....So well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
salty--astringent--bitter sweet i loved it ++++10 anju