# A Promise I Made Myself... Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# A Promise I Made Myself...

Rating: 2.7


I have promised myself to keep my face
Towards the light, even if faint and pale
For it gives me, even if brief, a respite
From despair, grief—human plight…

Even when darkness and night descends
And I slowly crawl into my cold bed,
I try to think of now extinct fire flies
Alive and glowing in my mind’s eye…

Oh, pain give up, I refuse to succumb
Or hug you tight to my heaving bosom
Or wear you like a shroud or veil
I’ll rise like the Sun, for sure without fail…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 05 February 2009

Nice Poem of Conciousness and credibility, and high Potential desire, thanks for sharing,10++

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Andrew Blakemore 05 February 2009

A very uplifting and heart warming poem, excellent work. Best wishes, Andrew

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Sandra Fowler 05 February 2009

Always turn to the light, for light will be your solace. Praise for your beeautiful courage.10 from me. With thanks for the warm birthday wishes. Love, Sandra

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 February 2009

Very inspiring poem m'am......I truly loved it. 10 all the way

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

Such a nice poem to read, I liked it....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 February 2009

Excellent poem.From Pain travelling through positive thinking...........great! One of the best I read today.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 February 2009

The second straza is well woven, with thought well spelt. shan

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C. P. Sharma 11 February 2009

A very bold and positive face indeed. CP

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Raj Nandy 08 February 2009

This is indeed a philosophy we must all adopt! With light God created this world! We have His divine spark too - but fail to rekindle it! When we face the light our shadow gets left behind, but when we turn away, the shadow looms up in front! ! I had written a few poems on these thougths. Thanks. -Raj Nandy

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