A Perfect Landing Poem by Mamta Agarwal
A Perfect Landing
A gaily painted butterfly hovers over
A dainty flower, as a miniature helicopter
Patiently waiting for a landing signal,
The flower welcomes the timely arrival
And guides it to its destination,
As there is no traffic congestion
It makes a perfect landing with precision,
Without any accident or collision,
The butterfly deposits its cargo
Noiselessly moving to and fro,
Flower offers nectar to the visitor
Later it takes off with a flutter.
Spellbound I watch this in silence
And my senses revel in the image.
Have I ever seen, I wonder
Two butterflies on the same flower?
A mystery novel may grip the mind of a reader
Can it surpass the thrill of reading the book of nature?
10++++++++++++++++++++ Spellbound I watch this in silence And my senses revel in the image. Have I ever seen, I wonder Two butterflies on the same flower? Truth has detected your memory's eyes! !
Butterflies and flowers, and their rendezious, watched with a thoughtful eyes, , the concluding lines are so good, , , , , butterflies and bees are more intelligent and efficient than humans scientifically, ,10
for a great poet, whole nature is his laboratory, his workshop, to produce beauty identical on paper.....Very beautiful comparison, well maintained throughout with precision and expertise. My 10
a searching poetic mind...no answer yet for your quest...but you have pictured very well the flight landing reception and take off there...in your mind as well as in the poem lines there...10/10
yeahhhhh u bet mamta, a perfect landing could be a deadly one as well, butta throughout......nice piece!
'Have i ever seen, i wonder, \ two butterflies on the same flower' You only are capable of writing such line. I value you and your poem. Shanmugam, Chennai
In this beautiful poem two 'malis' work in harmony on a single 'phool', - how wonderful! -Raj Nandy
A beautiful poem with nice imagery. I moved noiselessly like a butterfly and enjoyed the nectar of this piece.10 added from me to it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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surprise for many, why do one fear death, nature always fearless..