A Nap............... Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Nap...............

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Feel lament
In a vague mode the stranger bang
It knocks the eye lashes
Strive to open with all the vigor
Yet he conquer with all the lash
Fall asleep in a stipulate way

Side that pass and take to dark
Drop there in a futile land
Corpse that kept on the long couch
Fainted to the cocktail slash
Psyche that pierce to all its side
Slide to his shoulder and conceded to leave

He takes me to some strange shores
Where float like a mighty star
All tides tap and stoop inside
Yet was silent in all way
Chase all as to beat all side
Amazed and a peace inside

Miles that passed on his couch
All was surpass and is vague
In a sudden find to stop this slide
Open eyes to the beam of light
Promise that was fulfilled by his side
Back to life with the entire verve! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Thursday, April 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sleep
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its all about sleep...................
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 November 2014

Very nice poem on sleep scripted with wonderful words.......kudos!

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

Open eyes to the beam of light Promise that was fulfilled by his side Back to life with the entire verve! ! ! An universal message.

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Valsa George 18 April 2014

When we fall asleep, we are blissfully forgetful of everything and we are taken to a strange shore until sunlight comes again to awaken us from our sleep.... After enough rest, we greet the new day with a fresh verve....Nice poem, Salini!

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