A Loner..................... Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Loner.....................

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Thoughts take me to a pensive mood
There my loneliness hugs my brain
As a loner a long side
I walk to the lap of nature

There I saw a lone tree
I lounge under that warmth
There my eyes blink with the shine of sky
I wonder at its altitude

Above the land it moves in haste
Never speak anyone or gaze
Loner moves on its array
Without a limit intended

There a breeze came to my side
In haste it taps my thought
Next time pat the tall in haste
And hack some leaves and march

All creations rhythm its task
All alone in such a ramp
Merge and split for a while
It's such a fanatic company

A loner walks to loneliness
So as to break his loneliness
Solitude there hype its soul
So as to make its company

Nature lush in loneliness
Harmonize them for goodness
Mop my loneliness just for a while
There I joined in that fad! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, August 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 30 August 2014

very truly you have said. At last, we all are loners only.But within this loneliness only the life gets nurtured.Thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 27 August 2014

Everywhere nature has scattered symbols that are guides for us- There I saw a lone tree I lounge under that warmth There my eyes blink with the shine of sky I wonder at its altitude A courage-boosting poem,

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. I loved the lines..... Nature lush in loneliness Harmonize them for goodness Mop my loneliness just for a while There I joined in that fad! ! ! Very true said, in fact we all are loners in all walks of our life. There are many times, we find ourselves lonely. Sometimes loneliness help us to look within. Beautiful way you have portrayed the natures loneliness. I loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 August 2014

Yes we are all loners here in some way or other.......and loneliness has its merits and demerits as we see bright example of Nature which in loneliness nurtures life...............very well penned

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