A Lock For Hearts Poem by Elena Sandu

A Lock For Hearts

Rating: 4.8


If you may find
A missing piece
Please,
could it be send
to me?
I also lost my key!
Inside the chest are kept
Two gems, a pair
Of precious eyes,
I still remember
Their heat
And if, once again,
I'll be allowed to peek
Who knows, maybe,
true love I'd see.
Or. Might his eyes
shine too bright
for unprotected sight?
Will love be sealed
or am I truly blind?

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Precious eyes are gems of love that carry wonderful vision. If love is not perceived one person feels himself blind. But we can feel this. Yes, you will be allowed to peek. An amazing poem is excellently penned....10 ******* This is nice to see you once again from PAoetfreak to Poemhunter...10

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Elena Sandu 01 July 2018

Oops. Sorry, already corrected the format of the poem, but seems it takes a little while to be shown. Let's be patient.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2018

A most wonderful poem, dear Elena, a gem. Truly happy to read your creations again, a gem for sure. A 10++++++ for the vote. Thank you so much for sharing this fascinating creation. With the very best wishes, Pipi.

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Hans Vr 11 July 2018

The feelings expressed here very poetically touch the heart of the reader. I pray for the most wonderful outcome. Excellent poem

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Kostas Lagos 02 July 2018

This poem is a precious gem.Fantastic work!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 July 2018

Such a lovely poem, Elena👍👍👍

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

Elena, a truly romantic write. So imaginative.++10 Robert

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