It can be fun to have a little fun
If good fun is coming you shouldn't run
Having harmless fun is fair exercise
Then go and have a little fun but be wise
You should beware of having certain fun
As it could later make you very stun
It sometimes happened after the fun is done
And it could leave you sad and numb
That's the sort of fun you need to shun
When discern it coming you have to run
All the same, a life without fun is done
Then it can be fun to have a little fun
A life should sweetly lived before it's done
As no one knows for how long it is come
Lovely and beautiful like the setting sun
Yet without a little fun life is good as done
A little safe fun a little safe fun
Live your life with a little safe fun
Live it right while there is chance
A little safe fun gives life a prance.
i'm glad the second of your poems i read was not so religious-themed, though your subject matter is your choice. this message from you in poetry, 'a little safe fun', is a philosophy i agree with wholeheartedly! it is great to be self-sacrificing at times, but i would not want to live my whole life....or my whole week...or my whole day...without something at least resembling fun. at least a little bit...and safe, to be sure! i like the rhyming and the repetition of 'a little safe fun'. well done, and i didn't NEED the explanation of the title but i always appreciate a note from the poet. i'll send this poem to my poemlist.
Have a little fun and remain safe that is the name of the game. A little laughter in life is good for the soul of men and women. Where would life be if there was no fun. Keep smiling. Enjoyed.
Light moments are needed in life....There is no harm in having some fun, provided it doesn't bring regrets or anything unpleasant on its wake! All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy! This famous line is applicable not only toJack but to all men! Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem! !
A wonderful poem.I agree with you.A little fun is required for living a happy life.But don't make fun at the cost of others.That is safe fun and it will not hurt anybody.
three years after my first comment on this fine poem i am now choosing to put it into February 2017's Section B of my/our showcase. thanks. who says old can't be good? bri :)
I read your poet's notes and felt good to know that the impression that I had while reading the poem itself was exactly as you described. What fun to read your poem. No need to worry about bad consequences. Only joyful feelings abound.................splendid.
Thanks for this poem which allows me to look for 'a little safe fun'. All work and no fun makes Jack a dull boy. Having harmless fun is fair exercise Then go and have a little fun but be wise' - a cautious allowance! Yet nice. 'A little safe fun a little safe fun Live your life with a little safe fun Live it right while there is chance A little safe fun gives life a prance' - wonderful!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree, fun and abandonment are two entirely different animals.