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A Kid's Oath!

(composed on Universal children's day-2011)

I'm a lovely kid of my small house
With sprightly, sparkling eyes...
Holding my computer's mouse
aspire to shine and rise...

With extra care i take my food
And play my games, but then...
i get scared of Mamma's mood
When someone takes my pen...

When Papa says, 'you'll have to work',
I keep on studying books...
When Mamma says, 'it's time for rest'
I pass her grateful looks...

I'm fond of juicy, chocolate creams,
And want to be a Sultan...
My glittering eyes are rich with dreams
I see for Pakistan....

I love my lovely home and school,
And love my friends and teachers...
I'll guide and work and follow rules
And make my better future... :)

Submitted: Wednesday, March 14, 2012
Edited: Saturday, May 04, 2013


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  • Amitava Sur (3/22/2014 10:48:00 PM)

    A lovely innocent dream /oath having no blemish or scar..... very nice

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  • Ramesh Rai (2/17/2014 11:59:00 AM)

    I search that kid where she is lost.

  • Kanav Justa (12/19/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    When Papa says, 'you'll have to work',
    I keep on studying books...
    When Mamma says, 'it's time for rest'
    I pass her grateful looks...

    haha, , these lines remind me of my childhood, , , ,

  • Queeny Gona (11/4/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    Very pleasant, optimistic and delightful read dear Ms. Shahzia Batool Ji. I loved the way you have expressed your childhood experiences!

  • Heather Wilkins (9/1/2013 11:55:00 AM)

    excellent write Shahzia offering hope for the future. nice

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/18/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    Beautifully portrayed Shahzia...Loved reading each lines...

  • Passionate Reader (6/30/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    well conceived, well portrayed! ! !
    Actually i wanted to quote my favourite lines but then i thought i can't quote the whole poem in my comment.... :))
    it's a fab poem! ! !

  • Sun Shine (6/3/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    amazing.... well written...

  • Bobby Wynn (5/19/2013 4:18:00 PM)

    How can you miss with this!

  • Valsa George (4/18/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    simple in diction, but cute in tone to suit to the mindscape of a kid! !

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