A Drop Off Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Drop Off

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Grumpiness seems on way
Grayness mounts on the sky
Rays that hide for this time
Silence pursue the flock of birds
Low height that measure the haste
Shade that marches with a glance

Spill the drops after awhile
That warmth the parches of land
Fertile the bloom and makes lively
After the burst its calmness
Over the sky its brightness
Rays that sieve and makes lively

Mind sometimes gloom in grieves
Sink it in the pool of tears
Swathe it with shadow wings
After awhile it burst and rapture
Revives the grief to the lane unknown
It's to the reality of existence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, September 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 October 2014

Yes this is the reality of existence we see in Nature and us.........great piece with great composition...........

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2014

Mind sometimes gloom in grieves Sink it in the pool of tears Swathe it with shadow wings After awhile it burst and rapture Revives the grief to the lane unknown It's to the reality of existence! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tears are not only relief but peace maker and a pace maker.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 30 September 2014

Spill the drops after awhile, beautifully composed in each step and each stanza of this poem and heart touchable. Nice and expressive one. Great work on sharing.

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