It's as hot as her fervent eyes
Welcoming as her cute smile
Soothing as her sweet words
Calming as her delicate hands
Securing as her gentle hugs
Comforting as her fruity lips
Sipping the tea from a cup
Is like kissing her lips with a hug.
(7th May 2008)
You have used great and apt similes for the modern elixir of life as Shakespeare says about sleep: '..................... sore labour's bath, Balm of hurt minds, great nature's second course, Chief nourisher in life's feast, —' An awesome poem. A new way to look at things. Keep it up.
... & reading this poem is like getting a fresh, fragrant cup of tea from you, Joan. Thank you.
i can say nothing but good about it.reading it make me shape the picture.that can be only with literature.............so cool.
So also kissing her lips means is like sipping a cup of tea....wonderful that a person can be allured over a cup of tea....provided that the tea should be tastily prepared...inspiring poem
I prefer coffee... LOL.. Great and smoothing poem Krista
I too love a nice cup of 'rosie lee', lovely poem joan regards Tom
I feel like drinking a cup of tea with this poem. I can't imagine that a simple cup of tea will be a very nice poem. Lovely poem Joan. Warm regards, Annika
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is short and sweet I enjoyed reading it.