A Love Affair Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

A Love Affair

Rating: 4.8


A love affair
is like a seed
once you sow and
looked after it
it will surely
germinate.

The seedling will
really grow fine
foliage will bloom
giving enough
water and warmth
light as well

The colorful
flower appears
some insects
will come and go
some will ruin it
'til it dies.


7th January 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 27 January 2009

beautiful write... lovely concept on the life of love... love needs to be nurtured and cared to grow into a wonderful love affair that blooms sweetly... 10+++

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Akram Awadat 29 January 2009

this is very awesome, really i like it cheeeers

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'The colorful flower appears' Rachel Ann Butler

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love affair is like a seed once you sow and looked after it it will surely germinate.... it will grow like tree and nurture the fruit... very good write and i liked it most...10 read mine everywhere...butterflies...o, mother

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

true... love always counts if its fairly handled.. love remove differences and once there is love.. it has after sweet effects like you said in your ich poem... specially I liked these lines which is theory like.. A love affair is like a seed once you sow and looked after it it will surely germinate. all my respect for you good poet and pray for your more success...10 +++++++

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Yes, we are all part of nature; the beautiful flowers and the insects. Your poem portrays so wonderfully the love we share, although not perfect, will survive until death greets it. Karin Anderson

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Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

great comparison of love to a flower, we are the gardeners to the garden of love...well said...Thanks for the lovely read...10

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