Treasure Island

Jazlle D. H.

(22nd January / Valenzuela)

A Love Song


Come climb the sleeping mountain my darling,
Come stray through the guarding trees with me;
For I long for the nature’s solemn song
And the singing birds of the green forest.

Come watch the waving leaves my beloved,
Come hear the enchanting music they make;
As they softly swing with the gentle wind
Like the singing birds dancing in the air.

Come walk to the mountain’s peak my darling,
Come envision the halcyon place with me;
Beneath the moonlight we'll make our haven
Like the singing birds nestle in the tree.

Come lie down and look at the sparkling sky,
Come cuddle me with your sweet promises;
Till my last breath I’ll hold on to your love
With the singing birds in the green forest.


27th August 2008

Submitted: Sunday, August 31, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, September 03, 2008

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  • Ted M (7/6/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    A loving invite to that special person with very interesting choice of words. (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (6/24/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    its rich and melodious but more then song ebven and what you expressed here is meaningful..multiple meanings are coming out from it.. the combination of words is enough catchy, heart feeling and impressive.. what i like in this poem is a promtion of struggle and courage... liked it.. and you deserve to be called good poetess of children and young generation as well.. pray for your long and happy life..just go on..future is yours...10++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (1/5/2009 11:58:00 PM)

    This is a very well expressed, written, and beguiling love poem, Jazlle. I liked your phrasing in it very much, as well as your use of singing birds as a metaphor for love that repeated in the final line of each verse. It's quite an accomplished write!
    Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (1/5/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful.
    Lucky he who is allowed to wander through the guarding trees and explore.
    Your words express such velvety softness while the sing the sirens' song. (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (9/1/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    amazing love song..i feel like swinging in the hammock..with caress of lovely
    fairies, singing..very nice...

    Best Regards,
    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Chris Vanbrusselen (8/31/2008 5:55:00 PM)

    i like this poem very much Joan.According to your explanations i don't know where you get it.You must have a very strong feeling or imagination for love and understanding.A kind of very kind psychology you don't know you just have.However you do it you do it! kiss.Chris. (Report) Reply

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