The Last Piece Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

The Last Piece

Rating: 4.4


My apology
to those I have caused pain
to those my artificial popularity affects them
to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating

I'm sorry
I never meant to hurt anyone
I didn't intend to
I didn't want to

It doesn't matter
if I'm not the best
if I'm not part of the top 500 poets
if my poems are not in the top 500

It count much
my writing improvement
your critiques on my poems
the friends that I've met here

My heartfelt thanks
for your constructive criticism
for the poetry knowledge you've shared
for sharing your poems

Thank you
for your inspiring messages
for your kindness
for your warm friendship

Poets and Friends
thank you and I'm sorry!
for sure I'll miss your friendship...

21st June 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Jazlle, Yes, your words are extremely heartfelt and apologetic, but I don't know the reason so i will stay in the dark and say thank you for writing this poem. Love & hugs. Karin Anderson

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thanks for these touching words, your apology is so accepted and iam sooooo sorry too...now I can learn more of what can be gained from any pain..that is a soothing words for the mind of poets..as like that the loving spirits of poets have to be.and i appreciate your honest words and your courage....my respect for you...best wishes..................

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

I don't know what you are apologising for, this is lovely and heartfelt, stay and write more 10 Lynda xx

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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009

touching poem, well done

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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

My heartfelt thanks for your constructive criticism for the poetry knowledge you've shared for sharing your poems its the best stanza of your poem and poem itself is very rich and charming one...liked it and its idea and the flow is melodious... well done..10+++++++

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 July 2009

Have a wonderful journey and we are all awaiting your return to this poetic oasis as early with the coming of the newly decorated humming birds.

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to those my artificial popularity affects them to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating... i too was victim of same.. i fought it out with challenge and proved to the task m 4th now... good write...10 read mine.. it deeply hurts me.... can i reach on the top? .... miss i miss u, mary to marry..

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 July 2009

heartfelt sadly and great penned.. felt your warm feelings through those stunning words.. keep on my sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Rosalinda Martinez 30 June 2009

thank you for your poem. it is full of humility. keep writing and congratulations!

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

A writer should never have the last piece for he and she holds the intellect power of the populations. A unique theme written in an apologatic manner conveyed the softness core of your heart......10/10

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