Forbidden Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
Forbidden
In your eyes
I can see the questions
asking me why it has to end
In your eyes
I can feel the pain
telling me what have I done
In your eyes
I can see the sadness
that your heart tries to hide
In your eyes
I can't say I'll stay
and find that it was a lie
In your eyes
I can't look straight
when I say goodbye
In your eyes
I turn and walk away
Tears roll down your face
I don't want to look back
So you see the tears in my eyes...
21st April 2008
Beautifully written, Though on the surface the subject seems to be romantic love, I think it applies to partings of every kind. I think all of us have had occasions where movement in different directions to the good.
Your Poem very much affects the reader. Parting is such sweet sorrow; Nobody likes to part from sum 1 close. Great write from the heart 10+++
A very fine poem indeed. The eyes are very expressive of our emotions. You have used that imagery very proficiently. This is a touching poem written from the heart. Thanks. A 10.. Richard
.......................................questionably well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 6:42:55 PM # 1.0.0.1119
sob... I know how you feel! That was a lovely... sad... but lovely piece X