A Cause For Pain Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Cause For Pain

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Love can cause so much pain
Full of worries and so much strain
Complete derailment of train
Only losses and not so much gain

Why it must be caused at all?
Do we not know it is near fall?
Still we go for honest call
Ready for high jump and scaling of the wall

Loved ones may not depart
They may drift away with slow start
You might have got wind out of it
It has met untimely death before you could meet

It must breathe beautifully
Sustain the attack heart fully
It may heal with passage of time
You have done no crime

Heart is to break and so head is to ache
Let there by any type breakage or attack
Heart will pulsate with new emerging waves
It has not to ache but to pave

New waves to catch from any direction
Take it to memory with careful action
Making it sure for no more heart break
No worry on face or eyes to speak

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 27 July 2010

Full of worries and so much strain Complete derailment of train Only losses and not so much gain....... nice poem to be read One must be prepared as it is certain all the way.......10

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Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

Love can cause so much pain Full of worries and so much strain... can cause lots of pain....10

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Hans Vr 02 August 2010

Vey clearly stated. What we love most can hurt us most as well. Well done, great poem.

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Okan Emanet 01 August 2010

A breathtakingly excellent characterization on the structure of love and resulting pain... I really congratulate you on such a wonderful work.... a real 10 from me...

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Danielle Pongi 31 July 2010

This poem? my favourite(: thanks for posting.

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Chand Shikari 27 July 2010

ied all the time till we got married It was necessaciated but hurried I made a blunder and not queried.. can cause so much pain....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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