A Cat Poem by Louise Bizzari

A Cat

Rating: 4.3


There was A Cat left in a house
Whose occupants long gone
He comes and goes
With spotted nose
To wander there alone
Through vacant rooms
He hops and zooms
No ball of thread has he
Past moldy walls
Down doorless halls
He plays with hearty glee
Up cobwebbed chairs
Down rusty stairs
No whiney tigers gloom
He darts about
With fearless snout
In dark, in dust and doom

Louise Bizzari (14 yrs)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 11 January 2017

Louise, you should you be proud for having written such a good poem at the age of 14. And even more proud for it being chosen Poem Of The Day. Congratulations! Well deserved.

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Linet Sabastian 11 January 2017

A nice poem with a good flow

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Sarah Persson 11 January 2017

A wonderful poem by such a young poetess. Your imagination in this poem brings the cat and the house to life for us all to enjoy. Well written. Thank you for sharing Louise

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Hans Vr 11 January 2017

This is a wonderful poem, Louise. Happy that admin made it poem of the day. It was a true pleasure to read. By now you must be 25 or 26. High time to start writing poetry again when you had already so much talent at 14

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Brandon Hackett 07 April 2005

Again, your poems are so well thought out and written. It's hard to find anyone that writes like this. You wrote this at 14yrs old! ! Unbelievable. Was this a Cat you owned at the time you wrote this and embellished on it? Would like to read more about you. Entralled Literally.. Brandon

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Practicing Poetess 22 March 2017

Being a cat-lover, I simply had to track down this little jewel! Hope that you are still writing, or will resume soon.

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Indira Renganathan 11 January 2017

Very good observation....lovely lovely verses.....superb- - 10++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 January 2017

I love cats...... both domestic and big wild cats++++++++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day+++++++++

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Tatiana Berdennikova 11 January 2017

A wonderful poem that gives a lively description of a cat.

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Clarence Prince 11 January 2017

Lone it was, yet a whole house it had inherited; it was a well blessed cat.

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