Louise Bizzari


Comments about Louise Bizzari

  • Rookie long gone (4/9/2005 5:42:00 PM)

    Having read through your work tonight, there is a lot of talent on display. Ignore the Herbert's of this world, they never got anywhere and they don't want you to. God bless, and keep up the good work.

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  • Rookie Mary Nagy (3/28/2005 2:05:00 PM)

    I think it's obvious by some of your 'attention' you've received you are an enormous talent here. Some may not like the competition.....I hope you stay here at P/H and share more of your wonderful poetry. Not all people here are angry and mean. Sincerely, Mary

  • Rookie Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson (3/21/2005 1:37:00 AM)

    Louise Bizzari, wondering when you'll be posting some more of your poems?

  • Rookie Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson (3/7/2005 10:00:00 PM)

    . Louise, I like your poetry, and find it refreshing. I like a person to speak their mind as you do. Anyone can cater to a person's ego, but you tell it like it is. Never be afraid to speak your mind, no mater what others might say, and remember it isn't always the quantity of poetry one writes, but the quality of each poem that really matters. Your 13 poems are great, and even better than my 85 poems.

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/4/2005 7:06:00 AM)

    Forgot to ask: Is the reason that you do not list your biography that you do not have one worth mentioning?
    H

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/4/2005 7:04:00 AM)

    I find your poetry suboptimal, your mental state questionable and your general demeanour on P/H of such pathetic juvenile anger that I am hereby inviting you to try your luck elsewhere.
    If you think that your 'poetry' will keep you here, I know you are mistaken.
    To me, you sound like a disgruntled Jew (no racial slur intended) who has not a chip on her shoulder but a load of manure of questionable origin.
    Perhaps professional help would be the thing.
    H

Best Poem of Louise Bizzari

A Starlit Night

If I were a Starlit Night
I would paint the sky
In darkest light

Splashing heaven in veiled disguise
To shadow dusk from mornings rise
Like jeweled beads upon a sea
Of rushing waves in tapestry
That splatter garland in colors bold
Of quickened silver and whitened gold

Moonbeams strung would drape each star
To blend what's near and blend what's far
Each velvet dropp of star and light
In dotted waves of day and night
Would catch each tear upon your face
That broke and split without a trace

Against the moons transparent veil
Where ...

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Time

My song of time a soundless hymn
Like weeping rain against the wind
I'll sail along a sea of space
and weave a crown of moonlit lace
On foamy clouds I'll make my bed
On starlit nights to rest my head
I'll dream of life while growing old
Asleep on thoughts that turn to gold
Though shipwrecked dreams I've come across

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