David Whalen

Freshman - 629 Points (5/18/38 / Covington Kentucky)

A Blue Haiku (American Haiku) - Poem by David Whalen

I’m down: <(here’s the news
Just cause I’m white… doesn’t mean
I can’t get the blues


Comments about A Blue Haiku (American Haiku) by David Whalen

  • Gold Star - 16,990 Points * Sunprincess * (4/30/2014 6:15:00 PM)

    ............this haiku is really blue....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (4/30/2014 5:34:00 PM)

    Love this haiku! Great imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,990 Points * Sunprincess * (3/22/2014 2:21:00 PM)

    .........great write....... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,630 Points Bri Edwards (12/26/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    i haven't read much haiku, but this is probably the only one so far which i thought was worth my while. i mean the only haiku.........not the first of your poems! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,929 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (3/7/2012 1:22:00 AM)

    Crafty, unique and very honest. Wonderful to read! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 19, 2011



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