A Better Lover Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
A Better Lover
We All Want To Be Man,
But I Want To Be A Better Man
We All Want To Be Husbands,
But I Want To Be A Better Husband
We All Want To Be Fathers,
But I Want To Be A Better Father
We All Want To Be Sons,
I Have Always Wanted To Be A Better Son
We All Want To Be Leaders
But I Want To Be A Better Leader,
We Want To Achieve
But Me,
I want To That Better Achiever
We May Have Lost
But Still Want To Be A Better Loser,
We Failed,
But Still Want To Be A Better Failer
Bare This
Hear This
And Never Dare It
We All Want To Be Lovers,
But I Want To Be A Better Lover,
Its indeed good fdull of UN-expectations...and you've carried me thro' Specially 'But Still Want To Be A Better Loser, ' thats the spirit if we get everything best life becomes stale insipid I thank you for a poem with fodder for thought...tenner ~ Regards ~ niv Thanks for comment on my poem I Want To Be Raped Invite to read and comment on my sequel poem [read as a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’ or any … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment
Better is really better therefore be good and ever positive.
simple straight forward but hits the nail right on the head. Good poem, strong message
Nice poem with an honesty and simplicity reflected through each line. Keep writing
O! realy? Dats jst some wonderful stuff truely written with much honesty. You just do not disappoint Anele. Do u? You one of the most active young lad I've came across
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Indeed, I also wana be a better father to my kids and a better lover to my sweetheart! ! awesome my friend... Siya_! !