A Dream Come True Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

A Dream Come True

Rating: 5.0


Hard to believe
The nerves so likely relieve
With loads of questions flooding the mind
And the tendency revolving to mark the miles

And one breathe I smilled
I saw the light
And the night saw bright
My fantasy was realy

I woke up
Arrogant as ever before
I smilled once more
And I took a step
By that, I lived my dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 09 July 2012

u're always perfect in your ways.............as from the lines: I woke up Arrogant as ever before I smilled once more And I took a step By that, I lived my dream

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Neela Nath Das 29 March 2012

The emotion you play with words gets a concrete form.Always! That's your poem.

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Louis Rams 04 March 2012

the miles that you walk and the smile upon your face, no one can ever replace.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

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South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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