I Can Wait In The Rain Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

I Can Wait In The Rain

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I woke up in the morning
The rain was pouring
And my thoughts were flourishing
Filled with memories

In my mind was your love
With your smile in my heart
Every step I took
Told me of a whole new look

There way we grew old together
With drops of rains
Not stoping us from fightin our pains
And your strength
Not weak enough to carry our slains

The jelousy of the thunderstorm
Everytime it hits with its noise
I run my heart with beats
Praying that you safe from the other boys
Like any other
This morning calls for another

Oh! I miss you
Nevertheless I love you
One day I'll atter these pen-words
With my lips to your forehead
I'll send a white dove to your love

And in it,
Will be written
'I'll wait for you by the rain'
For you, and for you only
I'll invest my patience

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 24 February 2012

youthful passionate and rhythmic poem, Anele....love this poem

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Neela Nath Das 29 March 2012

Your romantic self spoke here in this poem.Nice expression___I'll invest my patience

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Lizzie O'neill 04 March 2012

This is a powerful and romantic poem, when reading it you know its straight from the heart.

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Louis Rams 04 March 2012

your heart is heavy and tells a story of love sent to you from above. one day your courage will meet what is destined for you, and this much i know, this much is true.

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Pheko Motaung 03 March 2012

Very powerful and passionate poem! Well done

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2012

I'll wait for you by the rain I'll invest my patience this two lines frame the poem so well...every words you try to pull here really emerged by you mind, a need to tell and share...i am like it, such a perfect fit with the title I can wait in the rain that sounds romantic! haha_Unwritten Soul

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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