A Beautiful Life's Game Poem by Aftab Alam

A Beautiful Life's Game

Rating: 5.0


I was nowhere; neither was any trace of mine,
In fact, in the lap of death, enjoying life's pine,
I never fled but throughout the life, I bleed,
Still, enough blood is left, for peace to plead.

A skeleton clad with the flesh, by Lord's grace,
On this earth, enjoying with beauty of nature,
With the ugliest thought and with hexed dress,
If nature can't be saved, can we preserve future?

"All those born will die", death is not a surprise.
To die unknown and untraceable is not wise,
Poverty not a hurdle but a lamp, on the way,
"Poorly birth is not a crime but the death, I say."

Whenever, trapped under the wave of the time,
And there none to help; I needed no Lord's help,
I prayed for His strength, rhymed with His rhyme,
"I will save myself, alone sufficient, without the yelp"

Lord created us from clot, taught to hold the pen,
Teaches man that he knew not, ah! A lovely gain,
Still, verily man is rebellious, for power and fame,
We are inching to death, " a beautiful life's game"

Monday, September 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was sick but seeking the life, never feared, death is the natural phenomenon and we all have to face today or tomorrow. All trying to defeat the truth and Lo! Truth is undefeated.It is not a death game but a life game on the field of this mundane world, a beautiful ground and we are the most beautiful because beauty resides in the eyes of ours /Alas! We don't observe the beautiful surrounding while on race to win. It is a pin, that pins into, my thought and mind and on my whole existence./ How negligent they are who away from the nature and its beauty? …yet we are worried to death, Isn't a farce? How harsh they are!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 09 September 2013

Yes life is a game.you want to play it or not, you have to.This is the very truth which we can't deny.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 September 2013

lovely gain, lovely poem, really beautiful, thanks, my dear friend.

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Dave Walker 10 September 2013

A powerful life poem, a great write.

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Muhammad Ali 10 December 2013

superb. it is what i can say in words.

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Kalyan Mech 14 November 2013

“All those born will die”, death is not a surprise. To die unknown and untraceable is not wise. good write sir.

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Pardaz Sheikh 12 September 2013

“All those born will die true

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2013

A beautiful poem with great message.. Yes, life is a game, whether we want to play or not, we are pushed to play it..loved reading it.

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David Wood 10 September 2013

A strong poem Aftab, we must not fear the future but live life in the present. What will be will be.

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