Treasure Island

Neela Nath


21st Century Sita


Hi, Ram, don't get late,
With Ravan I have date.
Prepare soup for Lav and Kush,
O, give them also Orange juice.
Listen, don't nag over phone,
I'm busy bee and you're a lazy drone!
For shopping taking your debit card,
(then Ram pretends as if all words unheard)
Give your credit card, it's my right, Oye,
Hurry Ramu, otherwise, I'll apply 498 A.

Submitted: Sunday, April 21, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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Aswath's poem is my inspiration.

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  • Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 12:43:00 PM)

    ...............hahahaha.........so comical poem.lovely description of a 21st century Sita.........like most of the girls, she is too busy with someone who does'nt deserve her love. Ravana..................lovely write.. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (9/2/2013 9:59:00 PM)

    in all ages sita is sita. there may b other character adjusting with your write. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/22/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    It is indeed so comical! ! But has the modern Sita 'risen' to this level? We are informed everyday through the media of the abduction stories of many Sitas by the lewd Ravanas! Ravana had the generosity to keep her in his palace, though to satisfy his whims. The modern Ravanas use her, mutilate her and throw her to the dumps! (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (4/22/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    Really, on perusing this poem I thought of Aswath's recent poem and when I came down to see the notes I had a broad smile ! Oh! What a wonderful imagination ! (Report) Reply

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