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Rating: 5.0


sadness
i cant feel anything
pain
have bruises all over me, crying myself to sleep
wonder
if u still care about me

sadness
i cant love you anymore
pain i wish i was not alive
wonder
when you will hold me again

sadness
i miss your touch on my body
pain
my heart hurts and i cant see anything
wonder
when i will stop wishing i was dead

sadness
the moments we had replay in my head over and over again
pain
why did u leave?
wonder
if you really loved me

sadness
i cant stop crying
pain
part of me is dying
wonder
WHEN WILL THIS END?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 07 December 2011

Sadness, pain and wonder, , I could see the connection with them; ; ; A g'd poem! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 07 December 2011

Sadness, pain and wonder, , I could see the connection with them; ; ; A g'd poem! ! !

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Ronn Michael Salinas 04 February 2010

'sadness' and 'pain'. cool.

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Adam Reed 31 January 2010

dude that was awesome! love the bouncing back and forth sadness, pain, and wonder. three major emotions that only an artist can express as u did. great work! 10++

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Tai Chi Italy 22 October 2009

Very fast flowing expression of your sadness here taylor! it will end when you feel fulfilled again and if you keep writing, you will feel find your way. Life is a journey and nothing ever remains the same. Change is inevitable. Smiling at you Tai

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