Your Permission Needed Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Your Permission Needed

Rating: 5.0


At last I arrived here
To find You
A votive candle lit up in me
In Your honor.

I was in a state of utter confusion before
My mind was totally unstable at that time
I never knew my mission nor my destination
Now I realized who I am and what I am.

I always thought whatever I did was right
I did not know what was the right thing to do
Slowly I recognized the needs of others
In fulfilling their needs I feel content.

I wish to establish You in my thoughts
I extend a hearty invitation to You
I keep reciting Your name incessantly
I seek Your permission to be with You.

Friday, November 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer,devotion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

an introspective prayer, well written and one that come from heart cleansed by repentance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2019

I wish to establish You in my thoughts I extend a hearty invitation to You I keep reciting Your name incessantly I seek Your permission to be with You.......nice expression. Beautiful prayer is well executed in a beautiful poem, Thanks for sharing.

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Kingsley Egbukole 15 November 2019

Learned to be humble and considerate in a relationship. Got a 10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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