Your On My Mind Poem by Susan Wall

Your On My Mind



When taking my evening walk; you came to me in thought.

The spring air seems to make forget

the present with just a blink of my eye.

It seems that the past becomes alive my soul has cried

many times in the past thinking about 1989.

As we all know time always marches on

It’s hard to except our children

are now 21 and 20,18 and 14 last but not least.

When the walks seem long, as sometimes they do.

The beauty of nature with its flowering tree

just gives me a peace that time is a special gift.

Though I do not text and say (hi) that does not mean

that you do not visit my mind.

Copyright C Susan Wall 5-1-2014

Thursday, May 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is based on my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 02 May 2014

Dear Poet, A nostalgic traverse in tune with the 'silent sylvan historian'. pulses unnumbered have drummed healthy tunes within the fleshy castle built on bone structure... still, time keep praising the very existence of the guarding soul... yes, thats what made you contemplate still profound. rgds and love

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Thoughts from a walk! Inspiration can arise from anything. Nicely done!

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