Herbert Guitang

Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe - Poem by Herbert Guitang

I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
and your unfathomable; the abysmal kind of love

You revolve like the Earth that gives a magnetic kind of force
to touch the core and mantle of our hearts

I see your ardent desires like a red Mars to fight as war to cover
and protect me

You give a gigantic precious tenderness and enormously
unselfish affections like a Jupiter

You give me snowball rings like Saturn that gives remembrance all beautiful
things that we had been in the atmosphere of treasure memories

Your warmhearted axis that tilts on the rocky core of my life
is like in a deep ocean of Uranus that clasps me with grasping arms

You are like the sea as Neptune that your gentle flows
like clouds that drift my soul

On a very far and infinite distance from your presence,
you are like a Pluto moon that travels with me
and you are always there for me orbiting within
Your Wonderful and Marvelous Love.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe by Herbert Guitang

  • Veteran Poet - 1,566 Points Sofia Kioroglou (10/9/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful and lyrical! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 161 Points Paul Elenora (9/18/2015 3:15:00 PM)

    Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,039 Points Nisar Masoom (7/18/2015 10:36:00 AM)

    Such romantic symbolism. A poem of planetary love with earthly tones. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,416 Points Ramesh Rai (7/2/2015 10:30:00 AM)

    Lovely write like the rainbow sucks all pains. Thanks for sharing +10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 102 Points Naial Oniblab (6/13/2015 8:44:00 AM)

    Poem filled with love, , , , love that every person in the world would wish for. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Laurence Ruedas (6/12/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    Very interesting poem. I can feel the love while reading this. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,105 Points Louis Borgo (6/9/2015 10:04:00 PM)

    interesting pen very colorful poem as well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,886 Points Allotey Abossey (5/29/2015 6:27:00 PM)

    Love presented in a biut'ful form. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,540 Points Chinedu Dike (5/27/2015 10:55:00 PM)

    Beautifully and elegantly written love poem. The use of planetary bodies to adopt metaphoric piece of lines is indeed poetically remarkable. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 358 Points Benjamin Age (5/17/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty, , my best line in the poem, & i lov all ur poems Rose Gardner (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (5/14/2015 1:35:00 PM)

    A beautifully put poem, a great play on words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,939 Points Hazel Durham (5/11/2015 8:07:00 AM)

    Very entertaining and original love poem and so beautifully expressed, a gem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,692 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/11/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    No one has ever thought of the way you described and compared love
    very different.
    Mabuhay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Henry Garcia (5/8/2015 11:26:00 PM)

    Highly creative thoughts. Very interesting to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,074 Points Kim Barney (3/29/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Maria Luzong (8/22/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Gigantic precious poem
    Marvelous poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cosheila Bihag (7/27/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    wow....i enjoyed reading this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/15/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Herbert I like your uneque style.keep it up man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    ....Extremely and highly romantic
    ....universally beutiful
    ... a masterpiece work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/5/2014 3:47:00 PM)

    This mix of detailed descriptions of what is felt and metaphors involving the planets is amazing! I'm in love with the way you expose the loving feeling. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 23, 2015

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