herbert guitang


Happy Birthday - Poem by herbert guitang

The most beautiful greetings we receive
The best important days of our lives
The great moments happen in our existence
The center of our memorable events is Us, the lucky celebrant

The happiness is at peak and lively
The high energy of smiles and laughters are unceasing
The adrenaline of entertainment is high and spirited
The participation is very active and exerting

Your favor to close friends is attentively positive
Your gifts and request are mostly certain and assured
Your presence will have saluted and tribute words from love ones
Your deeds and memories will build up and get praise

Even the simple celebrant has time to celebrate
Even the workers have drinks to toss down
Even rich and ordinary people have foods to prepare
Even Rest In Peace people have their festivities and occasion

Before we start to blow candles and wish
Before we partake our sweet cakes
Before we raise our fermented drinks
Before we give our unforgettable surprises

Let us have the moment of silence
To give gratitude to the Giver of Life and Giver of the special day.


Comments about Happy Birthday by herbert guitang

  • Rookie - 242 Points Nancy Oyula (1/15/2015 11:49:00 PM)

    Wow! I so love this............ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 242 Points Nancy Oyula (1/15/2015 11:48:00 PM)

    Wow! I so love this.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,148 Points Marieta Maglas (11/21/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    Even the simple celebrant has time to celebrate
    Even the workers have drinks to toss down
    Even rich and ordinary people have foods to prepare
    Even Rest In Peace people have their festivities and occasion-voted 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,369 Points John Westlake (8/13/2014 4:58:00 PM)

    I like this one. It almost has a religious theme to it, though I am not sure which religion. No matter. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/16/2014 9:59:00 PM)

    wonderful composition.... well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    , , , Extremely beautiful.
    .......Intelligent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Anne Mayz (5/5/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    ...Wonderful poetry. Great done, Perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 3:31:00 AM)

    My skin hair stands when I saw the last lines

    Let us have the moment of silence
    To give gratitude to the Giver of Life and Giver of special day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jose Santos (5/1/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    A successful poem to be read. Thank you for sharing your nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bernadette Fernandez (4/29/2014 12:53:00 PM)

    A gratitude poem to the LIFEGIVER. I love the message. Beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    Its very beautiful poem. I very enjoy read it. Great poetry! (: (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/24/2014 1:55:00 PM)

    Very beautiful and influencing thoughts
    great poetry....! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Athena King (4/19/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    I liked your poem it is nice to read some thing that has a lighter tone to it every now and then. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie P.k Freitas (11/30/2013 4:45:00 PM)

    Beautiful write. I love this one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,758 Points Bri Edwards (11/21/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    laughers.... i can accept 'laughers' (people who laugh) but i wonder if you meant laughter(s) (the sound of laughing) . ?

    my favorite line is Even Rest In Peace people have their festivities and occasion

    a nice coverage of the topic, with a bit of religion thrown in at the ending. very clever. thanks for sharing. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points Douglas Mcclarty (11/19/2013 4:38:00 PM)

    Nice thoughtful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pradip Dasgupta (11/12/2013 10:17:00 PM)

    nice poem about birthday and the way it tell thankful to our lord. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,822 Points Susan Lacovara (11/11/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful that you take time to celebrate the Giver Of Life...well done! I always say one should never regret getting older, far too many people are denied the privilege...PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,579 Points Wahab Abdul (11/10/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    nice poem, i enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Avhishek Sharone (11/7/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    Nice poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 9, 2014


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