Zinnia Narcissa


Open Hands - Poem by Zinnia Narcissa

It starts with a heart of love
With the soul flowing of sincerity
A simplicity of self but imparting own behalf
With purity of intentions ready to give
Sharing gifts, reliefs, donations, pledges and any amounts
But the unseen shares are the time, efforts, and prayers
The good care, assisting the unable, and soothing the pain of people;
- Sharing can be our encouraging words

Sharing has begun with the Creator
The Son shares His life to us
Everyone has the Seeds of Helping
With an OPEN HANDS

Blessings of heaven will Shower back upon us
Pride and Greed hinder the Sharing
Bitterness blocks the benevolence
And Love of Money closes our Affectionate Palm

But our deepest heart will remain gentle
Laying our means to touch lives
Delight with dedication to give and help
With an Open Heart
Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE.


Comments about Open Hands by Zinnia Narcissa

  • Gold Star - 12,303 Points Luo Zhihai (6/2/2015 1:22:00 AM)

    Great piece. Keep it up! 伟大的作品。坚持下去! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,929 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/25/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    Very inspiring and heartwarming poem about caring and giving, a relevant poem in these our times. Superb theme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 293 Points Nancy Oyula (1/16/2015 12:18:00 AM)

    Sharing will maker the world full of love
    A loving world is what all of us want. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:26:00 AM)

    Very genuine and with high ingenuity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:09:00 AM)

    Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE..Really beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,901 Points John Westlake (4/27/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    Normally I don't read religious poems as they are not my thing. However, you have mixed in an important lesson into this poem. A world full of love? ? That would be good to be sure. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem!
    With an Open Heart
    Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE
    Love these two lines
    Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 821 Points Matthias Pantaleon (4/24/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    If only we can help a brother in need, open up and heal a sister in affliction then the world will be a better place for all (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,929 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (4/24/2014 9:11:00 PM)

    Excellent form and content, superb flow and fantastic word choice, very profound images. It's a joy to read poems like this. Brilliant! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/24/2014 9:58:00 AM)

    what a lovely poetry....! !

    No words for this title.....! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,760 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/15/2014 7:27:00 PM)

    A substantive statement on the significance and science of sharing. well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Monica Rupazo (12/5/2013 9:42:00 AM)

    Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE. And Love is greater than any of it......great poem sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mary Amrutha (11/24/2013 1:39:00 AM)

    A loud round of applause for youuuuuu (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Pradip Dasgupta (11/12/2013 10:14:00 PM)

    nice philosophical poem.keep going. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,244 Points Susan Lacovara (11/11/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    How very timely, this write. To the people of the Philippines, my heart goes out to you, at this time of great loss. Might I offer a suggestion to fellow poets...donate to the Red Cross. I have seen, first hand, after going through Hurricane Sandy, last year, what a truly tremendous job they do! Be generous in spirit, self sacrifice, that you might ease the burdens of those facing devastating loss. To the Philippines...May God keep you in th palm of His hand.
    As always...I wish you PEACE and understanding (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 64 Points Nyia Schultz (11/10/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    Very well said poem and really shares ur beliefs i find it very intriguing and wonderfully done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Humera Sultana (11/10/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Indeed, sharing is caring. a beautiful write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Humera Sultana (11/10/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Sharing is indeed caring. A very nice write.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (10/10/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    Great sentiments, love flows with sincerity! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,753 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (10/4/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    Sharing benefits everyone. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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