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Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe - Poem by herbert guitang

I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

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Comments about Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe by herbert guitang

  • Gold Star - 13,972 Points Kim Barney (3/29/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Maria Luzong (8/22/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Gigantic precious poem
    Marvelous poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cosheila Bihag (7/27/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    wow....i enjoyed reading this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/15/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Herbert I like your uneque style.keep it up man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    ....Extremely and highly romantic
    ....universally beutiful
    ... a masterpiece work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/5/2014 3:47:00 PM)

    This mix of detailed descriptions of what is felt and metaphors involving the planets is amazing! I'm in love with the way you expose the loving feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:35:00 AM)

    What a galactic kind of love to the beloved. BRAVO and BRILLIANT (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,135 Points * Sunprincess * (5/3/2014 12:42:00 PM)

    .....truly enjoyed this one...could this be a dedication to someone special....a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bernadette Fernandez (4/29/2014 1:08:00 PM)

    Wonderful and Fantastic. Very enthralling and riveting. Highly beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,462 Points John Westlake (4/27/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    A lovely poem although you did miss out Neptune. Maybe this was intentional? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. I really enjoy reading how you compare love with the universe. so indeed love is universe. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,132 Points Mihaela Pirjol (4/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, and a great way to compare Love with The Universe! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 107 Points Monica Rupazo (12/9/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    Lovely desire exposed from within to expound about the sweetest scent of purity. Lovely poem I salute..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (11/30/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    An excellent poem about love. I really enjoyed the comparison of love and the universe. Love, after all, is universal... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashlee Vandyken (11/13/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    i love this, manly because it has to do with astronomy but even so, it is very well put together, nice work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Humera Sultana (11/10/2013 9:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful work...keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (11/10/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Hello again Poet! ! ! ! WOW! ! ! Intense, overwhelming and universal (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (10/28/2013 10:52:00 PM)

    one step ahead to me. i wrote your love is like rainbow. deep write. well done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,372 Points Tajudeen Shah (10/28/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    A poet speaks of his love, its influence and realm in his life, multidimensional and varied in its nature. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points marvin brato (10/27/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Great piece of poetry...well-penned! (Report) Reply










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