Herbert Guitang


Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe - Poem by Herbert Guitang

I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

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Comments about Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe by Herbert Guitang

  • Freshman - 986 Points Nisar Masoom (7/18/2015 10:36:00 AM)

    Such romantic symbolism. A poem of planetary love with earthly tones. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,460 Points Ramesh Rai (7/2/2015 10:30:00 AM)

    Lovely write like the rainbow sucks all pains. Thanks for sharing +10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 102 Points Naial Oniblab (6/13/2015 8:44:00 AM)

    Poem filled with love, , , , love that every person in the world would wish for. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Laurence Ruedas (6/12/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    Very interesting poem. I can feel the love while reading this. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,525 Points Louis Borgo (6/9/2015 10:04:00 PM)

    interesting pen very colorful poem as well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,419 Points Allotey Abossey (5/29/2015 6:27:00 PM)

    Love presented in a biut'ful form. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 41,950 Points Chinedu Dike (5/27/2015 10:55:00 PM)

    Beautifully and elegantly written love poem. The use of planetary bodies to adopt metaphoric piece of lines is indeed poetically remarkable. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 358 Points Benjamin Age (5/17/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty, , my best line in the poem, & i lov all ur poems Rose Gardner (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,939 Points Dave Walker (5/14/2015 1:35:00 PM)

    A beautifully put poem, a great play on words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,691 Points Hazel Durham (5/11/2015 8:07:00 AM)

    Very entertaining and original love poem and so beautifully expressed, a gem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,689 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/11/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    No one has ever thought of the way you described and compared love
    very different.
    Mabuhay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Henry Garcia (5/8/2015 11:26:00 PM)

    Highly creative thoughts. Very interesting to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,123 Points Kim Barney (3/29/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Maria Luzong (8/22/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Gigantic precious poem
    Marvelous poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cosheila Bihag (7/27/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    wow....i enjoyed reading this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/15/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Herbert I like your uneque style.keep it up man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    ....Extremely and highly romantic
    ....universally beutiful
    ... a masterpiece work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/5/2014 3:47:00 PM)

    This mix of detailed descriptions of what is felt and metaphors involving the planets is amazing! I'm in love with the way you expose the loving feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:35:00 AM)

    What a galactic kind of love to the beloved. BRAVO and BRILLIANT (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,758 Points * Sunprincess * (5/3/2014 12:42:00 PM)

    .....truly enjoyed this one...could this be a dedication to someone special....a beautiful poem (Report) Reply










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