HERBERT GUITANG


Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe - Poem by HERBERT GUITANG

I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

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Comments about Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe by HERBERT GUITANG

  • Rookie - 314 Points Benjamin Age (5/17/2015 3:00:00 PM)

    I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty, , my best line in the poem, & i lov all ur poems Rose Gardner (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (5/14/2015 1:35:00 PM)

    A beautifully put poem, a great play on words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,981 Points Hazel Durham (5/11/2015 8:07:00 AM)

    Very entertaining and original love poem and so beautifully expressed, a gem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 896 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/11/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    No one has ever thought of the way you described and compared love
    very different.
    Mabuhay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Henry Garcia (5/8/2015 11:26:00 PM)

    Highly creative thoughts. Very interesting to read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,963 Points Kim Barney (3/29/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Interesting concept, comparing love to planets. I never would have thought of that. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Maria Luzong (8/22/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Gigantic precious poem
    Marvelous poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cosheila Bihag (7/27/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    wow....i enjoyed reading this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/15/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    Herbert I like your uneque style.keep it up man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    ....Extremely and highly romantic
    ....universally beutiful
    ... a masterpiece work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/5/2014 3:47:00 PM)

    This mix of detailed descriptions of what is felt and metaphors involving the planets is amazing! I'm in love with the way you expose the loving feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 4:35:00 AM)

    What a galactic kind of love to the beloved. BRAVO and BRILLIANT (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (5/3/2014 12:42:00 PM)

    .....truly enjoyed this one...could this be a dedication to someone special....a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Bernadette Fernandez (4/29/2014 1:08:00 PM)

    Wonderful and Fantastic. Very enthralling and riveting. Highly beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,505 Points John Westlake (4/27/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    A lovely poem although you did miss out Neptune. Maybe this was intentional? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. I really enjoy reading how you compare love with the universe. so indeed love is universe. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,406 Points Mihaela Pirjol (4/25/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, and a great way to compare Love with The Universe! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 109 Points Monica Rupazo (12/9/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    Lovely desire exposed from within to expound about the sweetest scent of purity. Lovely poem I salute..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (11/30/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    An excellent poem about love. I really enjoyed the comparison of love and the universe. Love, after all, is universal... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashlee Vandyken (11/13/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    i love this, manly because it has to do with astronomy but even so, it is very well put together, nice work! (Report) Reply










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