You give me a rose
As a token of love
Pure and sublime
It grows fresh and
Sweet like your love
Over passing of time
You give me a kiss
As a token of love
Soft and passionate
The flavor remains
On my lips till now
For next one I will wait
You give me a hug
As a token of love
Tight and full of care
My mind feels fresh
From the essences
You wear in your hair
2) this is the outer one next to all mentioned (inner) components, like i said great poem most refined, with a touch of humor. As I said SUBLIMEST poem with tinge of humor.5 Stars full on TOP! I have enjoyed Your Immortal Love.
1) Sublime poem about true love, but this love withstands time through all the inner things, but also contributed by essences, the most important part for this great success in love, the mind feels fresh,
heartfelt prose, very well crafted with wonderful imagery, rated 5*
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A very heartwarming write that makes the heart flutter. Yes, a great love exists beyond time. Beautifully crafted write.