Your Immortal Love Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Your Immortal Love

Rating: 5.0


You give me a rose
As a token of love
Pure and sublime
It grows fresh and
Sweet like your love
Over passing of time

You give me a kiss
As a token of love
Soft and passionate
The flavor remains
On my lips till now
For next one I will wait

You give me a hug
As a token of love
Tight and full of care
My mind feels fresh
From the essences
You wear in your hair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2021

A very heartwarming write that makes the heart flutter. Yes, a great love exists beyond time. Beautifully crafted write.

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2021

Very hearty words felt and strung beautifully....5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

2) this is the outer one next to all mentioned (inner) components, like i said great poem most refined, with a touch of humor. As I said SUBLIMEST poem with tinge of humor.5 Stars full on TOP! I have enjoyed Your Immortal Love.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

1) Sublime poem about true love, but this love withstands time through all the inner things, but also contributed by essences, the most important part for this great success in love, the mind feels fresh,

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Varsha M 07 July 2021

Beautiful words well woven with threads of love. Well penned sir.

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Lasaad Tayeb 07 July 2021

heartfelt prose, very well crafted with wonderful imagery, rated 5*

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