You, You're Having A Bad Day? Poem by M.J. Lemon

You, You're Having A Bad Day?

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I am a goldfish
swimming in a paper bag
filled with warm water
when the liquid drains away
I may be taken for lunch

Sunday, April 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,life,nonsense,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 March 2020

What a drastic situation! This is exactly what is called....'Out of the frying pan into burning fire'! Indeed a bad day....! Excellent presentation!

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Mj Lemon 04 March 2020

Thank you so much, Valsa. Yes, I remember writing this on...well, it was one of those days. Thanks again.

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 February 2020

and i thought i was having a bad day!

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Mj Lemon 25 February 2020

O wow...I hope things are better now...

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Bri Edwards 11 December 2018

OK! to MyPoemList. :) bri

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Mj Lemon 12 December 2018

Thank you! !

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Bri Edwards 11 December 2018

Throw in a baby eel and i'll even give money for it! bri (:

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Mj Lemon 12 December 2018

O my...a full grown eel would demand a greater lunch, I suppose...

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Richard Wlodarski 24 July 2018

Either PH or I are having a bad day because I could've sworn that I had read and replied to this poem. The goldfish has a very short lifespan in that bag that's made of paper, instead of plastic. However, after being taken for lunch, it may have evolved into a dolphin. Let's hope that it's in its natural habitat. Food for thought.

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Mj Lemon 24 July 2018

Thank you so much, Richard. And I think you sensed an inspiration...just how limiting, life-constraining that bag is on any and every goldfish that literally has to experience that ordeal..

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