You Do Drive Me Totally Crazy (Hybridanelle) Poem by Gert Strydom

You Do Drive Me Totally Crazy (Hybridanelle)



Everything that you say and do,
the touch of your soft fragrant skin,
do draw me much closer to you

and darling, you do simply amaze me
with the way that you do smile,
you do drive me totally crazy

but do know me through and through
and the smell of your fair hair does draw me in.
Everything that you say and do

let me feel captured and totally free.
When I am sad you do bring me joy
with the way that you do smile

but always to me you do stay true
and you make my world out of control spin,
do draw me much closer to you,

do sweetness, care and selflessness employ
and with patience on me you do wait,
when I am sad you do bring me joy.

About all the things of love I have no clue
and making love with you feels like sin.
Everything that you say and do,

do bring me closer to you and do me elate
while I get to know you better still
and with patience on me you do wait,

where only great things you do pursue.
The way that you do conversations begin,
do draw me much closer to you

and you do my life with beautiful things fill.
You are like an angel without wings,
while I get to know you better still,

where together through life we do continue
and when I loose with you I still do win.
Everything that you say and do,
do draw me much closer to you,

where with love for you my heart sings
and darling, you do simply amaze me:
you are like an angel without wings,
you do drive me totally crazy.
© Gert Strydom

Wednesday, September 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 30 September 2020

A beautiful constistent rhythm right to the end. Message loud and clear. Rhyming symetrical. Wow!

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Gert Strydom

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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