You... Do Belong! Poem by Lyn Paul

You... Do Belong!

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Why do you punish yourself
When you have done no bad
Your life has been a battleship
With no fun had

Why can you not forget
And grow with your everyday
Cause you were punished every minute
In every possible way

How can you bare these memories
And keep on soldiering on
Because you are a survivor
And you know You do belong

How strong is your big heart
To push through the daily grind
When your mind was neverfocused
You never could unwind

How sad it is you blame yourself
For your life of hell
You've kept it all inside
To ashamed... to tell

I saw your words blaming
All I could do was ask why
You being so sure you had done wrong
Just made me want to cry

So please do not blame yourself
What... Did you do wrong
A healthy young child
Who just wanted to belong

You Do belong... Honest!
It's just some do not know how to love
These not fit to have family
They just blame, just push and shove

So love you... for who you are
Be proud, Stand tall and grow
You give to others each day
There will be a new tomorrow




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Lyn Paul

You... Do Belong!
Wednesday, August 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hate,life,pain,abuse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Too many Suffering from the hands and the abuse of others
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 21 August 2014

For anybody who has been mentally abused this superb write goes deep to dissolve the self blame game, I have experience of been bullied and I used to feel it must be my fault. I love this wise and uplifting write that gives the victims power to hold their heads up high!

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Beautiful poem Lyn. I agree with you, why to blame self for the mistakes never committed. Just by blaming self one is putting low. Why to walk with head down, walk with head half high. Thoughtful write. In fact a motivating poem for all of us, including me Lyn. There are times I blamed myself. I was forced by others to see myself in that way. In one sense I am too a victim, pained a lot from inside. Though I know I was never at fault. To be frank it took all charm of my life itself. Just alive, I feel many times. Thoughtful write, loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2014

I like when u write it can relate and hold someone life.. Then u give courage as remedy_soul

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Tom Allport 10 October 2018

An inspirational write of there is always a better tomorrow? You need to believe in ones self! .......well written Lyn

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2014

A lovely self motivating poem, advising to come out from any harassment and don't get demotivated by any external force. Be proud, Stand tall and grow ...........Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 26 August 2014

People who are abused or unnecessarily blamed by others carry a deep hurt inside which slowly leads to self pity and self mortification which is absolutely tragic! To get out of it needs self effort and sometimes even expert guidance! When one is not at at fault, there is no need for a withdrawal....or sense of guilt or self reproach! As Geetha has put it, hold ones head high and face the world with confidence! Great write Lyn which will definitely soothe people in similar distress!

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Gajanan Mishra 25 August 2014

how strong is your big heart. great write, thanks.

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Neela Nath Das 24 August 2014

A poem with fabulous rhyme-scheme. Like your conversational style.

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