You Are My Dream.... Poem by Soumita Sarkar

You Are My Dream....

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Till your heart my long search ends
You turn into a hope that remains
Shoots of my desires started to settle
To find a corner in you to huddle
Day begins only to feel you closer
Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear
Still the eagerness to know you more
Gives a tug and leads me to a door
Door shall open the recess of your mind
Deep layers of your being thus I find
Each pulse and cell echoes in your name
Your hair, your sweat, touch and game
To narrate in you a life that is mine
I wish to be your part that is my twine
We shall built on earth a nest like heaven
With feathers of me and you twined and woven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 18 September 2013

Lovely, a match from heaven, and probably a dream come true. the eloquence of a passionate poetess, expressed in words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2022

It's a genuine dream of a lovely soul. What you express in this poem seems realistic one..A lovely poem. Keep writing!

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Soumita Sarkar 04 March 2022

Thank you so much Dilip Sir.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 November 2018

the most unkindest thing to do for any poet is not to thank the ones who loved your composition here i see mostly older men but LOVE is common to all human you may even now make amends o poet of DREAMS

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 March 2017

Long search ends! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soumita Sarkar 15 February 2022

My pleasure

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Kishore Kumar Das 09 May 2016

the close bond cemented between you and your dream....owner's pride.......passionate love in abundance in your splendid verses..

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Soumita Sarkar 04 March 2022

Thank you so much for your worthy words.

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Souren Mondal 18 November 2015

[...]To find a corner in you to huddle Day begins only to feel you closer Drink in you, eat you, smell you and smear Still the eagerness to know you more Gives a tug and leads me to a door[...] Passionate? Yes.. Romantic? Only with the CAPITAL 'R'.... There is obviously a 'desire' in the speaker to be 'united' in love with the 'object' of this desire.. But somehow, the verbs in use - 'wish', 'shall' etc. suggest a very different story perhaps.. The poem, to me, can actually be read more like a 'dream' than 'reality'... We can perhaps never 'know' the one we 'love' - once we do, unfortunately, it doesn't last... Not sure whether to call this a poem of dreams coming true or dreams REMAINING dreams.. Either ways, it is a poem incredibly well crafted.. Thank you for sharing..

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Soumita Sarkar 15 February 2022

So true, we can; t show love, and when we do so its already gone....this is a dream inside a dream.Thanks.

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