Soumita Sarkar Ray

Silver Star - 3,229 Points (Kolkata)

You Bow Low - Poem by Soumita Sarkar Ray

As I glide slyly spreading my charm
Attracting all furtive glances like a swarm
I strut through the garden, the park and farm
In delighting the others I see no harm
My roving whisky eyes can raise desire
Only to desert you hurt, to burn in fire
I gain that strength when I flirt
Thus crush your ego in mere dirt
I sway, I dance, I sing with ease
My affected airs potent to please
Thirsty hearts lined to share my smile
I do smile at every nook for a while
I break my limit and then go slow
Your advances leap to touch my glow
I feel important when you bow low
My order dictates and you follow
I start flying high and feel the power
When for a kiss you are ready to shower
All the treasure which you had tirelessly toiled
Even your praised reputation gets soiled
Descendants of Eve with tolerant brain
Who can play and ride to make you drain
This act is completely under my paws
World'll admire women changing laws


Comments about You Bow Low by Soumita Sarkar Ray

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (5/5/2015 8:08:00 PM)

    I feel important when you bow low
    My order dictates and you follow
    This act is completely under my paws
    World'll admire women changing laws
    Soumita this is too good yaar. Enjoyed...thanx dear (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 992 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/7/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    No doubt God made Eve with a smaller brain
    But in quality He made no mistake
    As dumb macho males woo and faint
    And finds her true colours far too late......

    Very good poem and I also welcome you to my page of poems for your esteemed comments (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (10/31/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    Who says woman can't change laws? they sure can nice write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 30, 2015


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