You Are Living...! Poem by Devanshu Patel

If you are dreaming, You are living. Machines cannot dream....! Excellent! Excellent! .............10+

Life is advanced with science and technology. Inventions give comfort to life and help us. But these can not dream for us. We see dreams. We feel reality. We promote love and peace with giving smiles. Machines cannot give smile or dream or joy. Machines cannot forgive. We can forgive. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned with deep essence....10

Machines never accuse anybody though they never go wrong! Nice write my friend, with lines that are so refreshing to note as human beings.10++

we make machines to help us do our work easily and in mericas etc counter lack of labour so they have made machines since ur in USA u know it it helps relieve science in man's desires believes

Yeah, machines can do a lot of things for us to make our life easy but they can't think or see dreams for us. They can't show emotions like we do. Very nice poem. Enjoyed.

True sir...sometimes, being stuck in the hectic schedule we start living like a machine....you have shown very beautifully how a machine is different from our life though it does everything that we do.

A wonderful, powerful and perceptive write. This great poem captures the essence of life. A meaningful life imbued with love, kindness... simply being a man. Beautifully written.

Forgiving....! If you are forgiving others, You are living.....! yes........ soo true....... love your enemies......... the call of Jesus Christ came to my mind. dreams make us live and write such beautiful poems. tony

Machines can do almost everything we do... Except Forgiving....! If you are forgiving others, You are living.....! Wonderful comparison dear poet. machine and you with all your humanness.......... beautiful. you lifted me up now in thoughts and i smiled after reading your poem. thanku. God bless u always. tony

The ability to dream, love, smile, cry etc are unique to human beings and are possible for the living only! So if we are doing all these, indeed we are living! A fascinating account!