You Are A Queen On The Mars Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

You Are A Queen On The Mars



My imagination's satellite
Goes all the way up there to discover
You are a queen on the mars
The sky with thousands of stars is winking at you
You are staring at the two moons of your red planet
Wondering if we were them
You are sitting lonely on a rock
And saying he loves me, he loves me not
Plucking petals of a lovely red rose
One by one

Now you are looking at the earth
The wonderful blue planet
And thinking; am I also thinking of you
Am I also missing you a lot?

On earth I am waiting for you eagerly
Looking at the sky for your UFO to come
And appear like the brightest star
And land on my land's beautiful greenery

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maggie Munro 15 November 2012

I'm trying to imagine how crazy a love could be under the influence of two moons! Nice work :)

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So Close 16 November 2012

once again you made it....you wonderfuly explained that the distance not a matter if our love is so deep....true love never dies....: -) »so close«

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 November 2012

The flight of ur imagery is marvellous. It is rightly said that a poet can reach even the locations/areas wheere even the sub rays can not reach.

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Jothi Lakshmi 19 November 2012

what a poem? . melt me. when we feel we write poem. But when we make others to feel, we are poets.

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

beautiful poem sir, great imagination..

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

So original and creative with great lines, I loved this poem. Inspired write! !

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Red O'mara 16 November 2012

Asif, a wonderfully novel and brave idea. Envy your ability to write lke this in a language that is probably your second or third. Most of us find it difficult enough in our first and only.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 November 2012

'tis an amazin' piece of poetry! Excellent Imagination! ! ! ! !

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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