You And I Poem by Savita Tyagi

You And I

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My thoughts and I
Clinging together like
Sediment and water
You and I like river banks
Together yet apart.

Pack of birds in flight
Soaring high in azure sky
Love's longing at a distance.

Crescent moon in oak
Your eye brow painted in sky
A kiss in memory.

In drowsy awareness
Fragmented memories
Floating like ice burg
To hit and stir silence
I clasp your hand as my own!

Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 18 February 2016

You and I like river banks Together yet apart. A longing for togetherness brought by memories and heightened by beautiful images of Nature which speak of lovely companionship! A beautiful poem on love and longing!

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Savita Tyagi 18 February 2016

Thank you so much Valsa. Value your comment so much.

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Mark Heathcote 17 February 2016

Awesome write nice one, picture painting of nature; body & soul.

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Savita Tyagi 17 February 2016

Thank you so much Mark. Value your words very much.

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Rajnish Manga 16 February 2016

Emotions apart, the ethereal portrayal of nature provides wholesome delight: Crescent moon in oak Your eye brow painted in sky A kiss in memory.

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2016

Thank you Rajnish. Happy that it delighted you.

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